| Reviews for HellHeart |
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   levi.hall.9279 chapter 4 . 4/12/2019 Harry is taking control; thoroughly enjoyed the chapter and I am eagerly anticipating the next one |
| geekymom chapter 4 . 4/9/2019 Fantastic chapter! |
| levi.hall.9279 chapter 3 . 4/4/2019 Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter |
| geekymom chapter 3 . 3/27/2019 Wonderful chapter! |
| christophertoddsears chapter 3 . 3/26/2019 I have found a lot problems one is you misspelling trunk. Another is you don't add some words that should be added or you add a word twice. This is good so far but you need to work on you spelling and grammar, so we the readers don't have to guess what you mean. |
| Tenjo chapter 2 . 3/18/2019 You should put some kind of separation when you switch perspectives... and maybe make each scene longer so you’re not switching between each paragraph. |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 2 . 3/16/2019 Fun chapter and they sure seemed to jump to the bedroom quickly. Thanks for sharing! |
| Brutus Lee chapter 2 . 3/14/2019 He picked up a "truck"? Just one of many small problems, alongside the many deeper issues with your story. Luckily I'm not paid to be a critic, so I can point out how poorly written this is without offering any constructive advice. Quite literally horrible. |
| Chaos Snow Kitsune chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 Not sure what to think of this one yet. Not enough to go on, but I'd like to see more to see where this is going |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 Good first chapter and thanks for sharing! |
