This was a really good read. I fell in love with Harry and Hermione as a pairing all over again.

Thanks for sharing!

Excellent!

can we please get a sequel for this...Harry hermione Neville and Enola...I just love them... just waiting for a guy for Luna,...

Alchemists cell has EbolaNeville,... but ... please one more story... fast n furious type sequels

Damn...I was reading this story for umpteenth time, but now, here I couldn't resist imagining house debris like in Mr. and Mrs. Smith...

Good work

Although knowing Harry was severely disfigured and imagining him as some Mad-Eye Moody I very nearly stopped reading, but his meeting with Hermione showed the true Harry we all love, and I wept. His suffered so much and Hermione knew it and I felt their emotion/despair, but what captivated most of all was Hermione's love for him, and here I thought I've exhausted all forms of love between those two!

Now I have to say the only thing I've disliked so far is the use of curse words from everyone, just seems off, having them use "American" curse-words. Instead of "fucking" it should be "bloody" or "sodding" or none of the above but what do I know, thats just my opinion. With that said, I have read every word of your story because it is so well written and has purpose/reasons/consequence and actual ties to canon.

This story is pretty awesome. I haven't read a story where Harry was strong enough to draw other wizards into his following and address him as their "Lord". I like this!

Harry's power seems off the charts and I can tell he and his group could have gone dark perhaps if Voldemort werent still around?

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Wow, this story was fantastic. The magical world-building, conflict setup, diversity of characters, all of it was excellent. Loved it - thanks for writing!

Well, that was somewhat anticlimactic. Can't wait for Ron's punishment

Just...wow. Very impressive work overall. Thank you for sharing!

So many good things, good plot, pace and structure. For me this was quite unique and a great build up, though it fell flat in the end. The whole added on system of magic cool but a little overdone. Then there is sex and swearing everywhere and IDK which of the two I got more annoyed by.
This story is mixture of positive and negative thoughts for me. It also is too open ended I guess, left with so many questions on how they'll fix the world. Also, Sue. All that trouble and then never hear of her again, basically. Little pointless beside shockvalue. Which is in this story a lot, and angst.

Having said that. I did like this story, enough to have me read on well into the night.

Amazing story! Loved that Ron got the point in the end! Thanks so much

I wasn't going to review again till I finished the last chapter, but I had to say... brilliant and loved it... so I'm now leaning towards this being one of my favourite stories...

Here I am at the end of chapter 11 and not sure if I like the story yet... its very annoying... I keep needing to yell at the screen, 'FOR FUCKS SAKE!' And now I find myself skipping bits as some of its so long drawn out and frustrating... its like watching a train go by and wondering when it will get to the destination... its 11 chapters of Angst... a constant parade of will they won't they... the relationship between H/Hr is so like reaching for something and as the fingertips touch it it slides away another inch... But I'm gonna stick with it as the good bits are really good, and I need to see how it ends... I will review again at the end...

Great, really great, story it has been a pleasure reading and imagining all the scenes.
Thank you