Facing an army of monsters in a populated city seems like a good time for ubw ?

UMU extraño esta fic

Is cinder in this story Miyu who grew up thinking Shirou abandoned her? For some reason that last line has me thinking she is.

Awesome

Me encanta gracias por el cap espero con ansias el siguiente cap

The idea of an Anti-World NP destroying the moon by accident makes me chuckle every time I read it.

Shirou is 19? *Straightens cloth* Now is my chance
Time to seduce a sword

Hey are you making more of this? It's really well done and I hope you continue, it's the best I've seen

Please rewrite this so shirou isn't a brain dead moron and without him being a student. Seriously with what we currently know about the strength level of rwby shirou could solo run this whole world.

This is complete bullshit... you want me to beleive that a guy that can litterally see through almost everything , that has been there for 4 years know nothing of what hunter and aura and semblence? the guy know grimm exist, from this point everything else is completely and absolutley stupid...

Not being able to pose strong and logical base mean than no matter what you write it will mean shit and be convoluted, like say... a 30 years old guy going to school with 15/17 year old kids (cause of course that's logical)

Need more

The idea of him joining the academy for years is completely ridiculous. He is stronger than Glynda, and I don't think she would be stupid enough to shackle him when she could simply activate his aura, give him a hunter licence(?) and put him to work.

it makes absolutely no sense as to why shirou is so ignorant to things like aura and semblance, i get that miyu is his priority but it would make more sense to research this new world to make finding miyu easier especially considering how aura and semblance are common knowledge in remnant

Thanks for the chapters _.

Gee, leave something a few months and people already start clamoring about a fic being dead like real life isn't a thing that exists. And also people start copy/pasting vsbattle wiki pages in reviews for some reason, but I digress.

I'll admit I'm not all that familiar with the Miyuverse portion of Fate, but what you've written is more than enough for a reader to understand the distinctive nature of this Shirou as opposed to the many other variations. I do believe that he is perhaps slightly too unaware of the world around him, though, but that's not a massive issue as far as things go.

I like that the reason for Shirou sticking around in Vale makes sense, and many angles have been thought through sensibly, as opposed to the not-bad-but-still-cliche 'character is dropped into Remnant, helps Ruby beat thugs, gets invited to Beacon' shtick. The way you used Cinder and company in the first chapter to set up just what kind of life Shirou has been leading was also very well done.

If I had to offer one personal criticism of sorts, it's that the pairing feels like it's being used as a crutch for writing conversations. Don't get me wrong, I adore the idea of Shirou/Glynda already, but it feels as though most of Glynda's thoughts when talking to or thinking about him are about just how much of an attraction she is developing to him. It's not a huge issue, but it starts to get noticeable after a little bit. Perhaps it may have been better to wait just a few chapters more to introduce her crush on him? It depends entirely on how long you want this to be, which of course is hard to tell early on so it makes sense to get things introduced sooner.

Either way, I look forward to seeing how this goes.