Finally caught up. Thanks for the chapter. Akitsu love forever.

Thanks for the chapter. Really enjoyed it.

Thanks for the chapter, very much enjoyed it. Akitsu is so adorable!

T-the s-stuttering i-is s-so a-annoying. Stop it.
Seriously. Stop. It. No one sounds like that. Everything else that I dislike is fine (flailing arms, face-palming, sweatdrops etc) annoying but I can ignore it. The stuttering is something I simply cannot read in any fic without actually getting annoyed, which is bizarre as I think I’m quite a laid-back bloke. I’m aware you’re not writing it for me, just thought I’d put that out there, perhaps use “umm...” or “ahh...” or something similar. Just p-please n-no m-more s-stutters!
Cheers!

I have a guess. A certain Wind Sekirei perhaps?

pls update. This is good. Very good

Better than original

not bad at all. though instead of the icy dick thing, why not the classic "Think unsexy thoughts, think unsexy thoughts". leading to Minaka in a speedo(hurrk),sorry about that image, to Akitsu in a 2 piece swimsuit. besides having Kazehana as another in his list why not Uzume by chance, or perhaps the kick centric fighter.(she should've watched the OVA Shadow-skill to be more of the threat) looking forward to more. until then, later!

so he pretty much has a downgraded form of toto's Love Labyrinth from deadman wonderland, he just has to kiss the sekirei instead of tasting someone's blood

Arata Is a... Chill dude
That has to be one of the funniest ways to discover you have powers. Like one day you have your boss shouting at you because of a bad purchase and you think the should cool the f**k down and next thing you know he's become a human icecube!
Excellent work my dude.

I dont get it dude, you writing many version of the same thing. At the end are you gonna update all of them? Im not against it mind you, its just confusing that there are só many versions coming up at the same time, you should pick one focus on and later update the others because one of them will strike your fancy more regardless and get more love, as such later you can write the others with the structure from the first and have an easier time. Ill admit that I dispise unecessary drama but the development that Came out of that was worth it.

If you write lemons please don't do sound effects...it just weird to me

Good chapter.

First why Matsu, not that I mind she's hot, but so is Kocho, it'd be funny as hell if your OC could reset a Sekirei's link, I'd beg for Kocho, Saki, Yahan, and or Nanaha(also known as Nanami). The main ones being Kocho, Yahan, and Nanaha.

As for the reacting Sekirei that's Kazehana I recognize some of the words you used in particular the reference to the winds.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Akitsu is just too cute.