I have a theory!
I just came up with this.
It supports the Kris and Susie RPG Theory You know the first room? It was the supply closet. There is a door between the closet and the abandoned classroom. There were dust bunnies.
Maybe Lancer was there because he was a Jack that slid under the door.

This story is very engaging and entertaining I like it a lot. keep up the good work

About halfway into reading this,,, I love this so much; wonderful writing 3

This is beautiful. I hope to read more soon!

I love this and hope you continue it's amazing

Well where do I start? I binge read this even though I gotta get up at 3 am XD And IM CRAVING MORE MAN. I love that you fleshed out the characters in some way. I love the seeds of suspense with aspects of the story like Susie's reactions to kris gaining popularity Kris' reaction to Snowdrakes story is too relatable for me. XD as much as i love the dark world not seeing it here is a nice breath of fresh air. In conclusion keep up the good work

This is great, you've done a good job of writing the characters interactions and dialogue to be believable and with good detail to their thoughts and actions. I hope to see more of this story also kris and suzie.

I love this story so far! I cant wait for the next chapter.

love the story and definitely looking forward to future chapters.

This is amazing, keep up the good work

Oh damn what an interesting story you’ve got going on, please update soon