Hey moonlyt/reain! I'm really glad you've decided to came back and start working on this, based on your profile. I was a fan of this work since its first came out, and i remembered you promised to finished it-which you then deleted the account but i still have them in my old phoneI'M NOT JUDGING. I just wanted to see this story take place and hopefully, eventually, gets them completed. Do take care yeah, wherever you may be!

Fuck yeah take all the time you need when mate

I’ve been watching this story since you were reain and I’ve loved it the entire time. Can’t wait to see where you take it

I REM reading this story before. I remembered liking it then, and I still love it now.
Thank you for the republish, and hope to see more soon.
Ironically, didn't understand the backstory then and still don't now lol. Maybe with time though.
Keep it up!

Update soon!

Okay so. Here's an honest review. I'll start with the bad and then move on to the good. Now before I start don't get discouraged. These things are easily corrected. The biggest issue I've seen thus far is your shift to a more minimalist writing style. This pretty much ties in with everything else btw. Your old Through the Eyes of the original 200k word publish before you deleted it, was a whole lot of nothing mixed with some really great moments. The amount of flashbacks and content you could've cut out was insane. Repetition everywhere. Boring and confusing sentences. Weird structure and word choice. I could tell youd never read a real book in your life, just raw FF (not an insult btw most people don't read anything at all). A minimalist style isnt bad and it works well but not for your fic. Not with the kind of story youre trying to tell. Your fic is a slow burning agonizing trip into a fun, dark and edgy world where your Naruto makes a difference and some new bullshit perspective changes things up. You need the detail. You need to write out more and more. The world building and the digging into characters heads is what hooked me and I'm sure a lot of others in the first place. You turned Misuzu and Nikki into full-blown main characters. You constantly breath new life into what is a shitty hentai show that just happens to hold a very special place in most weebs hearts. Somethings are cringey, who cares? We're not asking for a fucking HBO worthy story you can take it easy lol.

Three years ago you posted what was a mediocre fic within a dead sect. It had all of the same plot points as every other hotd fic and brought nothing new to the table. What it did have, however, was imagination. All of us readers who waited for an update every week, even the ones who hate your fic, can agree on one very obvious thing. You care about your story. It didnt do anything different. It wasnt perfect. It was sloppy and ridden with mistakes, and I still loved it. The level of detail and background and extra dialogue was crazy.

Now re-reading this, I can see you've actually picked up a few real books since then and took some advice. Your writing is stellar for a FF author and miles ahead of what it used to be. You cut out most of the unwanted content and chilled out on the flashbacks. Youve streamlined everything. The word choice and sentence structure is stronger. Characterization and dialogue is even better than before. Shows you even care more than I thought and that's why we stick with you. Fuck man. I love hotd. I love this fic. I don't care if I have to wait a month at a time. You give me a nice meaty chapter like back then with the level of care and detail your pushing out right now and I might not hunt you down for constantly disappearing.

Stay safe!

YES PLEASE. Can't wait to see what you come up with.

On another note, I don't get the excessive (imo) rejection of "edgy" MCs. I mean, what's so bad about a (somewhat) detached protagonist that is low-key trying to sort their own mind and feelings out? They make opportunities to write different stories with interesting tones and perspectives. Sure, it's really cringy when an author doesn't know how to properly write them, but come one, not all are bad right?

so excited you are planning to update again!

This did it for me. Your Naruto is a super edgy and fun character to read albeit dry. Its obvious he isn't really there in the head but I kept asking myself, how far gone is he? This chapter told me all I needed to know. He's so fucking broken and I love it. This Naruto is so scared to lose Misuzu, he was THIS close to committing outright murder on Niki/an innocent civilian so that Misuzu would have a higher chance of survival. This screams volumes on how warped his mental state is. He isn't a good person and that's going to make this one helluva ride.

Holy shit, a perfect combination of angst and romance, fuxking hell, I have to say its not that too far off, the way you portray Naruto that grew up in a AU is fucking good, I just need fucking more!

Next

Ahhh... finally found it. I noticed there’s been some differences from the old one, you’re rewriting it then? I just wish you didn’t delete the old one but hey, it’s your choice.

Only a few changes so far but it’s pretty darn good still. Suzu died last time iirc? And Naruto didn’t go all out until the bus last time. Interesting choice. Looking forward for more.

Please continue

I keep coming back every year to this section hoping to see news about "Throught the eyes of". That story was a masterpiece, the best Highschool of the Dead fanfic.

Im very grateful for that story and I'm incredible happy to find this again. Moreover with the final scene of this chapter, legendary. It's so good that I remember this no mater how many years have been.

Epic bro
The translation is very rare and my English is really bad.
but even so this story is my favorite in this genre, I hope update.