This is good. Please continue soon

You went back on another aspect of your story... when you did Sakura’s POV from their childhood, Mebuki seemed just like any other parent who hated Naruto. But now you’re trying to say she wasn’t like those who hated him, as she never did.

Why is he being so open with them? I mean... telling them about his whole history and even the kiss with Sakura is silly, but telling them his plans is just plain stupid and unnecessary.

... you’ve had him using the water clones this whole time, claiming he used them to spy, attend the academy and study in Orochimaru’s bases for him. But now you have him having to eavesdrop on Mizuki’s conversation with his water clone, as if his water clone can’t transfer memories and speak of the shadow clone’s transferral like it’s something he hasn’t been using with water clones this whole time.

Granted, water clones DON’T have that perk but it’s how you presented them, so why are you going back on that? That’s not even starting on the bullshit about Naruto being unable to use the regular clone technique. That was just a weak plot device to have him learn the shadow clone technique, in both canon and even more so in this. He can use the transformation technique, which would logically use just as little or only slightly more chakra than the clone technique. Even if it the difference was huge, he could still learn to use it with enough practice.

love it

Can't wait for Sakura and Naruto to meet again down the road.

However, immediately, would love to see Ino's reaction to Sakura's change of view of Sauske and Naruto.

As always, looking forward to the next update!

I love this can't wait for the next chapter and anko rocks

Need another chapter ASAP

I gotta say this story is a interesting one for sure and especially with the scene where naruto kissed sakura kinda pulled a few heart strings for me(i don't know why), but it kinda me a bit emotional, so all in all i enjoyed it.

Solid story so far,hope to get some more updates soon.

The story is great! Keep it up Author !

this is the second story i read from you and damn i am liking your style , i like how you summarized everything in the beginning , i hate when i have to read that beginning over and over again in all those Fanfic when there is hardly any changes , why bother writing it again and taking chapters if you are not gonna change anything?! so i am glad you took care of that in two chapters .

this is a great story , naruto is dark here but can hardly blame him , sakura finally woke up and that scene before leaving was golden . i just hope you wont continue alternating POV , i mean i dont mind showing us how sakura is doing but a whole chapter for her every-other chapter is just too much . anyway i love this work of yours , really enjoyed it and cant wait for more chapters. please update soon if you can .and thank you.

grammar is really bad, it needs work.

This sounds good. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever.

While I'd do enjoy this story so far, It's a pity that I'll have to wait till you update this story but I'd think I'll try to manage by reading your other stories. I'd have favorited some of your stories in the past.