All good, it's great that you are editing your work to make it the best it can be! I will eagerly await your next chapter.

I enjoyed this chapter mainly for Hiro and Karmi's characterizations. Even though this chapter isn't perfect, I had such a blast reading it.

Things are really geting in motion now. Really wonder however when the next chapter will be.

And I can t wait to see how the others react when they find out that they had awaken an ancient creature of darkness.

Very nicely done! I hope you also update Hiro's life of crime story soon. After all I pretty much wrote you a story plot for you on how to do it. Nice to read this. Must go now. Enjoy your day~

I just found this story not to long ago and I am already having trouble waiting for the next chapter. I hope real life is not bothering you to much and that the next chapter will come out soon.

The chapter looked great really gave my shivers. Boy this hiatus was big, I can't wait for the next chapter, and by the way I remember how it was in chapter 1.

And in this chapter Meela said next, when he is near his friends and family he will simply forget about her. This means next he doesn't need to be physically around his friends to tell them what happened he could tell them via video chat on the computer or on the phone. Everything is pure logic, Meela doesn't know what a mobile phone or a computer is anyways.

I also can't wait for season 3 to come up, I really wish to see Hiro and Karmi's ever evolving relationship, I hope they will become, not just friends but something more. Eventually. And I also hope Disney will make a season 4 as well.

Creepy, fast-paced, crazy good details. Love the drama and the dialog. Everything was so real! Love it! I really love it! I hope you also update the Life of Crime again! And Frozen! Keep it up! and good luck with your exams!

I absolutely love the chemistry between Hiro and Karmi you've written out for this chapter; it's my favorite highlight so far. As different as they are, they work really well together. Their characters are as consistent as ever.

I'd say this chapter, despite being filler, is full of excitement throughout. You did a pretty epic job with it.

So Meela picked a random pair of sisters to join her ranks? Considering she is a newcomer in the modern San Fransokyo one would think an Elder Vampire like her should be more selective, choosing minions with the skills and knowledge to help advance her goals and establish a power base.

terrific! Wonderful! Nice!

Wonderful Chapter I have to say and by the way I am also romanian living in Romania and of course I don't want the name of my country to look bad before the world but aside from that I really love your story and I am looking forward for more.

When will you manage to post the next chapter? I really wonder.
I don't want to comment but it took you quit some time till you managed to finish this one.

Even the evil vampire sees them as a cute couple

The aftermath of this story's previous chapters is explored very well here, and I'm most pleased with how it turns out. The character of Meela and the history of San Fransokyo are highlights that I approve of the most. It's great that you're not giving up on this story, superkoola, because its potential has yet to be fully explored.

I've not seen the show so I don't know anything about that. If you looked at my journal on DA you'll know what comes up in my story. Um sorry, I never got around to your other story just been super busy. Looking forward to what happens next in this one. I do hope you do return to that one with Hiro and those three girls eventually. Love to see more of that. Have a nice day and want to read more of all your big hero six stories as soon as possible and I loved to see Hiro as a vampire even if I'm a werewolf girl myself.