Reviews for Until The Dawn
bassplayer123 chapter 1 . 7/20
For those of you who don’t understand, it’s not a timeloop or time travel. Jaune is Ozma’s reincarnation; in his chat with Ruby he straight up says word for word Ozpin’s line about making mistakes from Volume 1. Weiss is somehow Salem’s reincarnation; she fights just like Salem did pre Grimm transformation (no weapon, all magic) and her personality is an exact match for Salem when she was still the lonely girl in the tower (doesn’t interact with her team and reads books alone). When Jaune told Ruby he and Weiss were soulmates, he wasn’t kidding.

I really wish this fic was longer than one chapter because it’s an absolutely fascinating concept. Who would even be the antagonists in this AU? Maybe the Brother Gods? Because Salem clearly never took a dip in the grimm pools, and thus never turned evil. Also, I noticed that Weiss was never referred to as a Schnee, which has interesting implications.
Newland Archer chapter 1 . 7/19
Really interesting! I'm guessing there's some time-travel shenanigans going on? Would love to see more.
Guest69 chapter 1 . 6/28
So much potential. So much you could do with this. I don't think I've read a soulmate fic about Weiss and Jaune before. Hopefully you may pick this up once again in the future. Nevertheless, thanks for the read.
NineYetis chapter 1 . 6/6
I have so many questions.
ASpecialSnowflake chapter 1 . 3/25
These 3k words convinced me to pick up RWBY.
Ryaan.G chapter 1 . 3/15
why won't u continue this?
Genesis1212 chapter 1 . 2/26
Is this a one shot? Ots really interesting take on Weiss and I love her Semblence this time around.
Hecseferblade chapter 1 . 2/22
Ooooooo! Catty Weiss and an ozma esq situation in which both Jaune and Weiss remember their pasta and that they belong together. I love it, I love it, I love it!i can just imagine Weiss going through the motions in a love game with jaune, jaune giving sagely advice on how to crack her she’ll open to her team.

Pyrrha being pissed that Jaune never looks at her the way he looks at Weiss and that she can never beat her in a fight. A potential epic fight between the two eternal lovers showcasing their cumulative skills to settle a deal or something like that, maybe to get Weiss to interact with her team

Oh so many possibilities, I hope you come back to this, this is definitely unique and I want more
Gilgamesh King of Mongrels chapter 1 . 11/13/2019
please... This story has me hyped up.
Gilgamesh King of Mongrels chapter 1 . 11/13/2019
Update? :D
Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2019
You can't just rev it up and stop out of nowhere, lad.
Jac Skellington chapter 1 . 8/27/2019
Great story so far! I’m already really interested right off the bat. Looks like things will be interesting here. I’m definitely getting a Ozpin and Salem reincarnated into Jaune and Weiss vibe. I might be off but Jaunes comment on Mistakes and Weiss’ lack of last name appearing and her general attitude in that fight makes me think of a version Salem who isn’t evil, but isn’t totally good either. I hope to see more of this story and where it goes! Keep up the great work
Ryaan.G chapter 1 . 6/11/2019
I loved it. Please continue. I've read ur other works as well and I absolutely loved all of it. U are an amazing writer so pls don't leave this site!
Ways chapter 1 . 6/3/2019
This was pretty nice. I liked it.
Deku Momiya chapter 1 . 5/12/2019
Please continue this
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