Dope

Dope so far! Love Setsuna.

Please dont make izuku permanently blind. . . for a few chapters i could deal with, up until the summer camp would be okay. but anything passed that would be a over all a horrible decision. but then again, this isn't my story

Pretty interesting but
Isnt UA a highschool? Not a colle he university?

I really like your story with the quirk you've given Izuku, it really seems that it has mutated and gone from a price for whatever he wishes to almost a power where he can say something he wants to happen with little to no drawbacks(minus getting tired) such as when he made the mud. I almost feel like he may have accidentally created the stronger give and take drawback of his quirk when he first learned of the monkey's paw thing and subconsciously changed reality and made that a part of his quirk. Either way I love this story and hope he learns to get control over his quirk or finds a way to cope with his new disability. Keep up the great work!

Fockin loved it mate, omagoddd the tension the suspense the emotions. It's all what we want in a story... My dude I fockin love u mate.

I like where things have gone for the most part, but the mutation Izuku's quirk has undergone seems like a mix of a plothole and drama. Towards the end of the chapter he was told multiple times that what he said became real, and he still kept talking. There seem like there would be easy fixes, like wishing to be able to communicate telepathically, but it feels beyond dumb for him to just keep talking, declare himself permanently blind, feel his quirk force Nana to stop saying she appreciates him, and then still keep talking. I hope that all gets cleared up and/or fixed, but until then it feels like an enormously bad leap in logic for everyone to assume he can't/shouldn't immediately do something about his condition and powers. I also know it's a Japanese trope/thing but constantly saying you don't deserve things and you're a burden doesn't seem like something Izuku should be doing, especially with a quirk that makes what he says reality, so I hope that doesn't cause any needless drama, and that all the issues currently surrounding him get fixed/don't compound on themselves because Izuku the guy who analyzes quirks in his free time, and everyone around him couldn't get him to stop talking or communicate a different way, which I imagine will have to happen assuming his power stays working the way it is, as a main character not communicating at all would be pretty weird to read.

I really appreciate how this chapter went. It would have felt hypocritical for All Might to give Izuku his quirk right then, and unlike in most stories/the cannon material, you've given Izuku the chance to prove to himself he can be a hero based on his own power rather than based on a quirk he got from someone else. I think that's really important to his character and would change his perspective going forward. I also like how you've handled Katsumi up to this point. Bakugo and his interactions with Izuku made it hard for me to get into the anime, and are part of the reason I enjoy fanfics more/am considering reading the manga. That's simply because their interactions don't line up with my personal experience with bullies, and I find it hard to watch Izuku constantly thinking of Bakugo as a friend and somewhat ignoring what his "friend" does, though I know he had his reasons it's still hard for me to watch and accept seeing as avoiding the problem or fighting back, failing because Bakugo has an offensive quirk, and then feeling hopeless, are the two more realistic scenarios with their dynamic to me. All of that is part of why I appreciate how you made a point of Izuku not quite holding onto Katsumi as a friend, and while making Bakugo a girl implies she's going to get paired with Izuku, I hope it takes a while and the point is made that it will take time for them to form a new relationship and that over a decade of bullying, close to two decades seeing as they're close to college age in this story, can't be forgiven and forgotten easily. I also hope slapping/semi rough hitting that's a trope in anime/fanfics to have a girl hit the guy when he does something dumb doesn't happen, as that won't make any sense to be acceptable between them when they're trying to move away from the abusive/bullying relationship they had as kids, and even outside of that it's not acceptable in general (I mean the Sakura Naruto dynamic stories often use between characters).
That all being said, I have a good bit to read before I catch up, so I'm going to get to that and hope it's all as good as the first few chapters were.

Please don’t make this a harem fic my guy

Is this gonna end up being a harem fic?

How mind-bogglingly stupid does this asshole have to be in order to say in one breath that his powers can alter reality in any way he says out loud, and then in the next breath declare that he is permanently blind and he just has to live with this.

This is just an unacceptably huge idiot ball for every single person in this room to be holding I might that not one person has suggested to him even once and he should just say out loud "I can see just fine and I am in perfect health."

Even if it would not work, the fact that nobody has even suggested it is just stupid. If it turns out that speaking out loud is the solution to this problem , then it's some extremely dumb manufactured drama.

Oh? Looks like Setsuna's the lucky lady! Honestly thought he would ask one of the girls he thought was cute out during the school period, but I guess the "early bird got the worm." XD

Hoo boy. Izuku's gonna have some trouble with both of his Quirks

... couldn't he just swap the damage with a regenerator? I mean, so long as he believes it should work, is should be an easy fix. Heck, there's Setsuna just in UA alone. She can regenerate lost parts, so swapping an eye or nerve, then destroying the bad one so she regenerates a new one would probably fix the issue. And a quick bit of testing with somethin more minor, like a cut, would make sure it would work (or convince Izuku is will, then his power makes it work)...

Just binge read your story and I loved it. A great take on the characters and an interesting idea for Izuku's quirk. I do wonder what the payment for resurrecting the dead will be though?
I hope you can update soon.