I can't believe how hot this was. Like daaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn! Totally one of my favorite.

Heh, it was a fun read! Good they had so much quality time :D

Maybe you should make this into a two shot story. It's too good to stop here.

Loved this! I’m down for some hot and heavy!

This is my new gold standard for smut

Holy shit! This was excellent! I can totally Kagome gonging him a run for his money. This was absolutely perfection. So sexy, so in character, so well written. Absolute perfection.

Hooooly damn! I must say I have a pretty good poker face when reading smutty fics but THIS! I legit I couldn’t stop grinning through the whole thing. It was so steamy and funny and I absolutely loved it! I’m actually craving for more xP

I think I died and gone to heaven because I agree I think this is the hottest one shot I have ever read...now if there’s a sequel to this, like it goes to their wedding night and they say I love you while consummating their marriage, I would not be mad ATTT ALLL!

Nice!

Holy shit I am in love. Thank GOD I don’t have a dick cause I read this shit at work and I’d be deaaadd! fucking loved this to no end. Like I can’t even right now.

CLAPCLAPCLAPCLAPCLAP ahhhh the wonders of sexua- er- "writing" pining, temptation, tension, and frustration. STAR THIS WAS GLORIOUS

So good, really really really hot, maybe the hottest one-shot that I have ever read. Thank you, I blushed so hard reading this in the train. please write some more like this.

STARLING HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME NEED A COLD SHOWER BEFORE WORK YOU WENCH!
Seriously, fan fucking tastic. I loved, adored, admired every moment of the porny porn ness. I adore you for writing this. It hits a lot of spots for me! Lol