Hey! I really like your fic, I just think maybe if you checked for run-on sentences and basic grammar mistakes it would flow better. I like the story overall, it could be better without run-ons tho.

I can't wait to read more!

Plus something else that I think should've been brought up was that a traitor taught the kids. Sasuke was treated like a Prince and Naruto was abuse emotionally and probably physically and mentally as well.

The first thing Kakashi 'should' have done was retest his genin intensively... On everything. He probably should have had the Hokage retest everyone.

Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.

I just found this fic today, and I must say I'm really glad I did!

I enjoy reading your version of Kakashi. I didn't realize how satisfying it would be to read a story with a more competent version of him. I'm glad he has been able to help them out as much as he has.

The fact that sakura has toned down the fangirling makes me relieved. I like her, really I do, but Cannon Sakura freaking out over Sasuke tends to annoy me.

I also like the personal growth Sasuke and Naruto are already displaying. Sasuke is not as much of a jerk, and Naruto is more focused and a bit more respectful.

I kind of wish this fic was Cannon.

I look forward to future chapters!

Love this story, hope you continue!

Good job keep it up

Excellent chapter! Keep up the great work!

Can't wait for more!

pretty good! sakura is really doing well for her self! keep it up!

narutos become a background character. kind of boring as well, theres no danger. too linear

I'm glad u update! It was great! But Are There going to be any pairings in this story? Maybe sasusaku and naruhina?

Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.

Some small grammatical errors but over all well done. Good job keep it up

Another wonderful chapter! Looking forward to more!

Gato's death is so anticlimatic and I love it to bits. He doesn't even have a time to monologue :'D