Very unusual style of writing, it's cool! I hardly notice it isn't written in the normal style, and it's certainly much easier to keep track of the characters this way! Although, chaps 16 and 17 are duplicates. It's a great story, and I hope Canon!sans gets to show off a little, or at least talk about his (thousands of) resets in comparison to them. Is the Thought!sans going to make a cameo? That'd be cool. You know, the one from the thought comic. I know he doesn't meet ant of the other sans' there, but he is in a void place and he is dealing with gaster too, so yeah... Idk. Brilliant story and I can't wait to read more!

This is awesome! The format is a bit awkward to read but the story is so cool

Way to make the most awkward thing ever even more awkward, Sans! *trying not to laugh* Well, this is definitely not what I was expecting, but in this case, that's a good thing. Also, Ink, I think you need to get out a little more and rethink your priorities a tad bit.