love it please write more

Bombshell indeed. Wow. A lovechild. A seemingly rotten one at that. That might make for an intriguing read should you choose to go that route.

Loved Lana and Clark's exchange, btw. That whole "This is my fault for not controlling the uncontrollable" was irritating to say the very least and I'm glad you cleared that air.

All in all, great story! Excellent work!

You're darn right I enjoyed that moment! Oh, SO satisfying! SO delightful! I haven't felt that good since Lois knocked the wind out of Linda Lake in Season 8!

The look on Edge and his men's faces when they realized that their arsenal was about as useful as paper balls was priceless. Classic, even! As well as the reactions people had concerning Clark's nature!

Now, let's observe the fallout and the bittersweet end of this interesting tale!

Darn right it works right! And I'm so glad you had Clark be smart enough to seek out lead and use his brain to make armor to defend himself! I did the same thing with my FF "Defense" and I really wish the show did it more instead of just that episode, "Extinction". Now, enough talk! Next!

Townwide Hostile takeover. Things are really heating up now. Can't wait to see...oh, wait! I don't! Next!

Whoa. Talk about beating yourself up! Awesome fight, man. But now that the battle is won, it is time for the war. The war against Edge.

Been away for a while, but I'm glad to see this continued! Things look like they're gonna pick up big time with the inclusion of Multiplex (Danton Black). Can hardly wait!

Just read this all the way through. Talk about some troubles. And nice ending to set up a potential sequel if you decide to go that route.

Me gusto el final, hace un par de semanas pensé que llegarías a eso. Tambien cree una historia hace tiempo paralela a exile donde Edge tenía una hija, pero no me fui por ese lado. Fui más por el lado de venganza.

Queremos más, pronto.

Whoa, talk about inner struggle, lol! Hope Clark gets out of this pickle somehow!

SO glad Lana and Chloe told her off! I hate this chick so much, I was tempted to punch my own laptop!

Not buying the "return to the fold" act. Clark's up to something. But what? Can't wait to find out!

Good

Oh, snap! I forgot ALL about Henry Small. I liked him. He was very interesting, even without the familial connection to Lana. Glad he swooped in when he did to put Addams in her place. I had mixed feelings about her. Sometimes I liked her, most of the time I hated her. She was always giving Clark a hard time just because he was a concerned citizen who wanted to help out his ever-plagued town. Although, I did love the idea of Clark having a law enforcement antagonist who thwarts many of his efforts.

So, Clark's finally gonna act like a man and clean up his mess, huh? Bout time! Can't wait for him to rip Edge a new one. It's gonna be ultra-satisfactory! Shoot, I wouldn't even mind if Lana punches or beats up on Delilah. I hate her. She makes me wanna vomit as much as Clark. If you go that route, make it as satisfying as Lois beating up Linda Lake in Season 8. Man, I LOVED that!

Keep up the great work, Lycox!

Quite an unpleasant, yet thrilling, chapter indeed. Gonna feel really good to see the Edges get their comeuppance, especially that scatterbrained spoiled brat!

Great work!