Are you going to update this weekend

So good! It is so disappointed this story been year you update late time! I am hope for new update!

Ahh Delphini/Naruko is really boring to be honest. Gets treated like crap and doesn't do anything in retaliation its sad.

I'm a little disappointed in this story... If I wanted to read Canon I would have just read the book instead... Good concept for this story though... Just feeling frustrated with this... It's turning out like 99% of the harry potter stories on this site ... Excluding the reincarnation and Delphini it's practically the same

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Needs a warning label, "Contains less than 0.01% Naruto, Contains 80% HP canon, 10% HP fanon."

i want to add something did Ron not try to drink Felix Felicis he may not have but he thought he did not only is that cheating it's like he was trying to take drugs for a game and on Harry's fifth year he cheated on potions second year he drugged two of his classmates and impersonated them and there was the time he almost committed murder on Draco malfoy and none of you say "oh he didn't mean to" NO THIS IS FIFTH YEAR HARRY he should know better hell there were times when he was just a strait up jerk to even his own friends so to the people who say windstorm16 is bashing harry READ THE DAMN BOOKS

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hi i read a few reviews and how is it bashing Harry these are the exact things he did in the books and the broomstick that McGonagall give him everyone was so cool with it in Gryffindor saying how his the first first year to be in a Quidditch team completely forgetting that first years aren't allowed to go to tryouts or have Brooms so pretty much the head of Gryffindor just broke a school rule for her house i don't want to be a snatch but shouldn't she be fired for that and why did she think he could play the sport he just caught some thing that was thrown the snith flies everywhere and the Bludger will Bludgeoned you and there are other kids trying to get the snith the only one who got bash is Ron and even that was well deserved Ron and harry only went there because Hermione was in Gryffindor so they would notice if she was gone windstorm16 was just being realistic and fair so don't bash windstorm on how she or he writes his/her's story and i like this every student and teacher thinks harry could be the hero but it's Delphi sure he might kill her father but she will do way more before that

This would have been so much better if you didn't dump Hermione into there group. Tired of her, she is in 99% of HP fics as close to the MC. It just so annoying.

Your writing skills are ok but can use some work but, I can't read this anymore, I would prefer it if Harry and Delphini were equals especially because of their families histories, not this subtle bashing of Harry. Look, as a Wizarding World fan I know that Harry got away with a lot that he shouldn't have, but you haven't had them interact once! Harry can be understanding if he knows you have good intentions and the fact that she took down Dudley and his gang to protect someone being bullied, that right there would put her on Harry's good list, I think you missed a good opportunity there, you don't have to make them friends if you don't want to, but allies against a common enemy (Her Father), would make for a much better read. As then Harry can see a different side to the Magical World that would only help. Not only that he hates bullies and is recovering from child abuse, so yes you are ignoring what made him such a good character. Now this review is my opinion and should be taken as such.

Plss update again plsss IAM begging you

That was good I wants read more and more of this story.

Why would Hermione even be in the same class with Snakes and Griffs? Can't really remember but it seemed like there where only two houses sharing classes until electives.

Im more interested in what Tommy is gonna do once he finds out about her and what she thinks about her father once she finds out.