Welp, this is a story that could easily slip into the M range, and it wouldn't hurt the story. In fact it could also be used story wise to increase teasing of the normies and Mabel in the group by Morgana and La Fay. With Pacifica La Fay, episodes like the NW Mystery Manor is certainly going to have to be cranked up, as for all we know, she may have already come to an agreement with Cordoroy Ghost. And the body swapping rug is going to be fun, especially when you have a situation of two bodies/three minds. But most of all I think we could really use a backstory chapter about how Mabel and Morgana became one, and how she earned/gained the twins trust and respect.

Now there are some nice story changes, but after coming in from your Dipper Harem story, there were too many times where it felt like I was rereading it, and it came in from the parts where you decided not to deviate from the original show. The Pennywise chapter was interesting, but could have used a bit more threat, and using a character like any fearmonger it takes some work and length to crank up the tension. As this could have been an attempt by Gideon to harm the Shackers, summoning up PW early and trying to focus him on the Shack. A missing tourists kid or two would have increased the fear level of what they were facing.

Other than all that, this story has some good potential and I wish you and your proofers the best in continuing these works.

Ahh that's really sweet in the end also nice using pennywise and Monty Python reference classic and good job using a reference from Hazbin Hotel

Job good, love hazbin, keep up the good work,

excellent work on this chapter and man this was nuts

excellent work on this chapter so what made you decide to have Pacifica be something in disguise for both of these fics?

Code: Morgana and La Fay, two top predators of their domain.

Glad to see the songs, and they are good choices overall.

excellent work on this chapter but is La Fay and good guy or a bad guy?

Curious to see what happens next, and may the Dipper clones rest in peace.

Who were they talking about?

Code: Morgana's true form revealed, is she alone in Gravity Falls?

Well it's still good to read, but I noticed when translating that there may have been some errors in the code that threw me off a little bit.

excellent work on this chapter and nice twist for the ghost episode

this has potential let's see where this goes

Code: Morgana's identity will be revealed soon.

I finally got to see the end portion of this chapter, and it really does fit Mabel and provide a good hint at what Morgana is. As per the request, I am keeping my lips shut about it until the reveal.

Love this.

cool