Reviews for Just A Little
Commander X Dalek chapter 5 . 1/23
Momo. I am sorry I have not read much of your work. Life is a pain and I have been busy. But your amazing work in this makes me so god Damn happy. I ship them hard, Ochacko and Froppy. Your work is as always brilliant, you embody the characters perfectly and so realistically. Chapter five feels so real, so human, and I am just loving it. This is like a slowly developing story, and it is perfectly done. True live stems from a well founded friendship. In conclusion, you are amazing, an inspiration, and I'll be reading your stuff more often when I need a stress relief and a break from reality. Keep up your beautiful work Momo and know that you got a fan with me. Sincerely, BlueX
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 5 . 1/20
This was enjoyable...well done
Jack Inqu chapter 5 . 1/17
It was a bit of a Diabolus Ex Machina that took the ladies out that fast, but at the same time, Tsuyu is right: keeping him preoccupied with them was important. The last thing the main fight needed was that guy around, either by himself, draining the heroes, or fused with Overhaul, giving that monster a scary ability like that.

And while I don't deny that any of the ladies might have been helpful in the fight, that whole thing was a massive clusterf*ck from beginning to end. The injuries the heroes got were bad enough; it might have been even worse if Overhaul and his goons had more targets to focus on.

Or maybe things would have been better. It's hard to say, and you can make arguments either way.

Anyway, very good work on this chapter. Ochako and Tsuyu are both allowed to be human, to be frustrated, sad, angry, and selfish, but ultimately care more about each other than indulging in self-pity. And yes, them hugging and cuddling is very sweet. :)

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.
Jack Inqu chapter 4 . 5/5/2019
I don't necessarily like rainy days, but I do like cloudy days. My eyes are really sensitive, so bright sunny days are like 'argh' for me.

But yeah, good for Tsuyu; she should have more days like that. :)

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.
Jack Inqu chapter 3 . 5/5/2019
That was definitely very cute, and good training for both of them. I'm deathly afraid of heights, so I would be freaking out in that kind of situation.

And yeah, Class 1A does seem to go from crisis to excitement to crisis. ;)
Jack Inqu chapter 2 . 5/5/2019
Nope, we never have seen Tsuyu's room, not that I'm aware of anyway. I too am curious about what it might look like.

Ochaco is a good friend, and so is Tsuyu; I'm glad they are there for each other.
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 4 . 5/1/2019
I can definitely see Froppy-chan doing something like this. Well done
Very nice chapter 4 . 4/28/2019
Nice it’s my prompt! Did a really amazing job on it! I loved all the beautiful things about rainy days you peppered in from the the atmosphere, the frogs, the flowers, even the sun breaking through the clouds! It was very nice to see how happy the two got along with a day like that too! Very nice!
Commander X Dalek chapter 4 . 4/30/2019
I have been stress to the point of ranting and being abrasive. MOMO YOU HAVE BLESSED ME WITH THIS STORY. I in fact read this during a storm, and I myself like light showers and thunderstorms. I actually was saving this chapter for a rainy day, and here I am reading it on both a literal and personal rainy day.

Please continue with you boku no hero academia ships and stories. You bring a new perspective of them being teenagers, albeit lovey dovey and emotional, but that just sets up for the story and ship as a whole. I think you like the idea of love from suffering, as in only those that love you can and will save you from your suffering. Examples: Keyboards, Through the Blazes, Cold Bodues Warm Hearts, Tender Moments, Just Us and many more. However, you also write pure fluff. You are an amazing writer, and I hope you can continue with another story based on these two if you must end this one. At least consider it.

Sincerely,
BlueX
GrnDrgnzrd chapter 4 . 4/28/2019
I don't mind rainy days either, but too much time dancing outside and I WILL catch cold. Lol. See you next time.
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 3 . 4/23/2019
Another cute little drabble to add to this ficlet. Well done.
GrnDrgnzrd chapter 3 . 4/23/2019
Flufffffyyy! Lol. See you next time.
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 2 . 4/22/2019
No, it sadly didn't show what the room looked like, but I did enjoy this chapter! Good job.
Adeline Wrights Fanfiction chapter 2 . 4/22/2019
It's surprisingly cold in the wee hours of the morning near the equator today. I don't know much about frogs and hibernation, but I know even less about BNHA - all this to say it doesn't take much for me to grant myself that suspension of disbelief that a superhero can train herself to hibernate for a mere week out of the winter months.

The fluff was so sweet, but Tsuyu's struggles had me really worried the whole time I was reading. I think I might still be a little anxious over her crazy shivering and chattering teeth even though she got to end the night nice and warm and in the safety of her friend's/girlfriend's arms.

I can't say it enough how much I love your characters' sweetness towards each other. Ochako was determined to make sure Tsuyu was alright, and Tsuyu herself clung to Ochako for dear life after the two had settled into bed together. It was as heartwarming as it was heart-wrenching!

Since I've been rambling, I'll end my commentary on this one note: I love how you name-dropped the title in the very last sentence again. It was perfect and somehow wrapped up the story in what felt like a fantastically conclusive fashion. Ochako couldn't do much besides keep Tsuyu warm. That's what she thinks, at least - her actions from beginning to end speak volumes, though, and her simple act of providing warmth was the result of so much love and affection.

Cheers, love. Thank you for the feels.
~ Adeline
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 1 . 4/18/2019
Interwsting little thing here...and well done.
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