i wondernif ellie will ever know about the wizarding world j such.. hmm... update soon

6'11" is freakishly tall for someone who's growth was stunted in childhood.
5'11" would be slightly more realistic

Very good so far I look forward to more

The only things that could be improved are more aesthetic more than anything else. I would suggest adding a line break of some kind when trying to separate sections, it makes it easier to read. The other thing that I would suggest is installing Grammarly to assist in spell checks. Like I said, minor aesthetic details.