Reviews for Ketchup and Mustard
A Mustard Fan chapter 14 . 4/27
I really love this, it’s one of my favorite things to read, it’s just so good.
BostonFan1993 chapter 14 . 4/6
I liked this chapter, it reminds me how the show likes to shift to the school life side of things once a season. My favorite moments were with Hiroto and Pony together, and I found it amusing that Monoma got along with him, he'd get along with an ex-villain if it meant sticking it to 1-A. lol.
I'm interested to see how Hiroto interacts with Hawks and Rock Lock, especially since the latter was reluctant in voting for leniency earlier.
Also I do like that Hiroto has some conflict with some of his classmates, I'd like to read more of it, and I liked that you chose Sen and Tsuburaba. Even though they have little focus, like Mustard, funny enough, I like them. It makes sense they'd be some of the grudge-holders since they were victims to his gas attack.
One other thing I'm interested in seeing in maybe a later chapter if he comes into interaction with any members of the League of Villains and their reaction to seeing him in UA now.
Great chapter, happy to see this updated in my email this morning. Take the time you need to keep going. The time restrictions is understandable. Keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6
I've been wondering whether or not someone was gonna write about Mustard, thank you!
Spartan3909 chapter 14 . 4/6
Thanks for the chapter _.
Baron Bolt chapter 14 . 4/6
Amazing work with a character that has little to no info on him. And I do like that class 1-B will get more screen time honestly there are members in there that should be in 1-a
BostonFan1993 chapter 13 . 3/27
I love this story. I'm so glad to see Mustard get a spotlight fanfic, and I love how you wrote his path into the league of villains, it matches some of the things I had thought up for him. Chapter 7 was a lot of fun to read with the faculty of UA discussing the pros and cons of him going to UA and love that All Might was on the side of reforming him rather than punishment. I love his meeting with class 1-A in the previous chapter and his interactions with 1B here. I look forward to seeing him in classes. Was also cool to see his 'reunion' so to speak with Kendo and Tetsu. lol. Looking forward to reading more! Keep up the great work!
Bookeater-otaku chapter 13 . 1/8
It's a beautiful story. It's sad that not many people comment on it.

The development with is new class is just beginning and this is a new turning point in the story.
Spartan3909 chapter 13 . 12/31/2019
Thanks for the chapter _.
Tom2011 chapter 6 . 12/25/2019
Now I am disappointed. So good start, character, writing and plot. And you just kill it. She left him, she didn't stand for him in the entrance exam and now she ask for forgiveness and it is. He is going to forgive her and he is going to forget about League. After all they just give him place to live and sort of friendship. Man, eh I am sad. Good luck with your next story. Maybe it would have better plot.
CrazyBigDinAZ chapter 12 . 12/6/2019
I have to say, this is quickly becoming one of my favorite BNHA fanfics. You're doing an amazing job taking a background character and flushing him out into a main one I want to see succeeds! I'm really looking forward to when Hiroto has to meet with 1-A again, and what their reactions will be.
John Prodman chapter 12 . 12/1/2019
I really liked this chapter. There's just great chemistry between Ms. Joke and Aizawa that was captured really, really well. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see more of this story. Btw, will this story follow the canon of Bnha with a few divergences (y'know, cause Mustard is with 1-B) or will it follow its own path? Just curious.
DrunktoDeath chapter 12 . 10/18/2019
I must say that it is truly amazing to see such a masterly crafted story and it was a really great update u perfectly balanced all the characters and there actions! Truly amazing story and I truly hope u update as soon as possible!
reza0807 chapter 12 . 10/17/2019
I have to admit the dynamic between Joke and Aizawa is captured perfectly in this chapter. Well done!
Spartan3909 chapter 12 . 10/17/2019
Thanks for the chapter _.
D.N.Works chapter 12 . 10/17/2019
Welp, that was a little interesting to see. Was looking forward to school life, but this was okay. Still, that had to be slightly embarrassing and shocking to accidentally poison his babysitter. Good thing all it takes to solve it was a joke.
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