epic pleaze give me more!

If you are continuing the story or making a new version perhaps you can use the yahg (shadow broker race) their strength is rivaled by their intelligence and would make a good asset

UUUUUUUUUUUPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Hey man please write more! I love your flow of story please please write more!

I enjoy this story idea but I would recommend that don't immediately push him into the mass effect races yet you could have him first begin biulding an Elpire from races like the Sith, Twi'lek, Chiss, Yoda race, Orks Halfling, Elves before they reach space age and create a powerful empire maybe similar to Valkorians with the eternal fleet.

Ok so what I'm getting is that mc better be calm and collected after being alive for so long he better not start having bullshit panic attacks and crying after finding out where he is that will ruin your char he's old very old now he should always be calm and collected in my mind I picture Samara or Thane for mc personality

This story is awesome keep up the good work

I really hope that the si invents more stuff it would be cool to see super star destroyers.

I like the old one better...

This has a lot of flaws.

Wrong info of tech , No immorality just slow aging and healing , the mc is way more cliche than the old one , and i dont get a shit so far...

Atleast theold one had goals and... it has flaws too but this one has way more flaws...

Sorry dude but this route sucks... like... alot...

yeah i read the comment for the chapter and stopped reading ... bad idea ... asin waay too clichee for me ... nice idea in the beginning but fighting an enemy of his own making in the mass effect universe that is all about the reapers and geth ? yeah no thank you

maybe i made that first comment too soon but here is something that anyone should have learnt in scool ... nuclear reactors CAN NOT EXPLODE ... if you are talking about fusion reactors ... well no one has figured out how to make one that produces more energy then it uses to run yet so who knows if they can blow up ... but nuclear reactors only melt down not blow up ...

ah here is a forth ... wolverine is not immortal ... he can be killed and he will eventually die of old age ... so yeah no immortality either way just slower ageing and fast healing ...

well here are a few notes :

first the element zinc is written with a c not a k so yeah small as the mistake is it kind of bugged me

second his obsession with going back to earth is a bit too much ... i mean if he keeps going like that he would probably build a starship and either crash it into a sun somewhere or it would blow up because of some malfunction halfway back to earth ... wanting to go back is fine but being too obsessed will lead to nothing but failure

and third ... rubberis made from a specific tree not oil ... sure tires are rubber mixed with oil but pure rubber is made from a very specific kinde of treesap

VERY cliche for Quarians (poor aliens in need) to show up and instantly get absorbed into the MC's empire... I wish that hadn't happened. It would also have made more sense for them to appear during a time before the birth of the Geth, and as part of an exploration of their mass effect gate.

Imagine you could control your appearance and you chose to look like a character from some shitty sci-fi... cringe.