You're welcome dude! I actually used your story as an example of how diverse and different PJO fanfics can be when I was explaining to my friend the beauty of fanfictions. I was also giving him examples of good Perlia too. Have a wonderful day!

Awww I hope you DO make a sequel. Idea ( one demigod son of YOUR CHOICE survived and found the half cow thingy I for got the name, the one in Titans Curse with a name that starts with an o. THE ONE YOU HAVE TO KILL AND BURN TO GAIN POWER TO KILL THE ENTIRE COUNIL I hope you do it :) Take a cookie for good job (::)

While the story has mainly in the start logical and grammatical mistakes I really enjoyed reading it.
It’s difficult to find a perlia story or a good one in this matter.
I really hope that u will write a sequel some day or at least another perlia story or with whatever pairing please no percabeth though.
Bye and I hope I’ll hear from u again
Yesse

I loved this so much I always wanted to see Thalia and Percy together and I loved that they were different then the titans and the gods and gave other people a chance to rule

You totally skipped the battle. Chapter 11 is a total repeat of chapter 10.

So so so good!

Um... this story was... interesting.

I love the story so far, but I do have a small issue with it. While I understand that Percy has taken an emotional beating, isn't he still fundamentally a hero? I find it somewhat hard to believe that he would so easily turn to taking the side opposite of the Olympians, even if they'd screwed him over. But that's it, really. I love your writing style! Keep it up, I look forward to reading your newer work

Story starts out good. But I would suggest adding substance. It just feels rushed, like most beginning fanfics do. So just, calm down, and take your time getting to the end of the story. Enjoy your writing and just take it slow.

You gave Reyne 2 thrones? 1 next to Nico, and 1 next to Hazel. I think one was supposed to be Hylla's?

Awh, I kinda hoped the Roman's would be spared at least.

At least he only swore to kill the greek children, not the Roman's so that's a plus I guess.

This has some promise, but it is obvious that you're new at this. So here's one simple piece of advice to make your future stores better.

Pick a PoV and stick with it.

Swapping the PoV character every few paragraphs is distracting and unnecessary. If you want to write in the first person, stick with the same character throughout the chapter. Swapping characters each chapter is okay, but any more than that is overdoing it. If you want to swap characters more frequently than that, write in the third person. Even then, the character your perspective is following should ideally only change between scenes.

I hope this was helpful, and I wish you good luck in your future writing.

I can understand Annabeth, but why Jason?

AWSOME MAKE MORE STORIES PLEEEEESE