Okay um...

What's happening here?

This makes absolutely no sense.

Uke.

This is all very confusing.

But we can try to make sense of it.

Comment section? You mean review section?

You're watching too much YouTube, mate.

Ouch. Akira is going to suffer from blood loss.

Damn, you are improving in your writing! Spelling might need some work, but all else is good!

Keep up the good work...

Also, it's Glynda. Not Glinda. I'm curious at what you are using to write chapter. The app or the site?

Also the chapter was very confusing, like it happened too fast. Though I think Igor just appearing out of nowhere is an Igor thing. The chapter is still gud.

ThE PhAnToM oF tHe OpErA iS tHeRe, InSiDe YoUr MiNd.

That aside, this was a rather surprising chapter. A lot of mystery in there.

Oopsie, didn't notice the 4th chapter.

Glynda being a dominatrix? Jeez whiz.

Profit? M'kay. Wait, he has brown and blonde hair?

Oh god, that beginning *shivers*

Anyway, good to have you back! Your writing is a bit better, so keep it up!

Yay, ships!

And also I like how you are capitalizing the names when they are first shown, that is pretty creative.

Also that ending authors note about legal age lol, don't lewd.

It went a little too fast and the spelling errors are driving me crazy (and I meant no offense) Also, why aren't team RWBY helping? Did Joker steal the show? So he can have the upper hand? Maybe. Great chapter, though.

Apparently, you have some mistakes. But, you'll be fine later on. Just double-check on the spelling and wording.

I can't say much without another chapter, but the story seems interesting, 'till then.

What? Im confused