Reviews for Alien Maelstrom
alkirius chapter 4 . 8/10
The omnitrix has DNA from various species, it would not be a surprise that it has the DNA of a kryptonian or a New God, in fact I thought how fun it would be for the kryptonian DNA of a woman to have and for him to transform into a woman, also With the ability to obtain DNA from the omnitrix species, he would have many species than the original, there are so many possibilities.
Postscript: I'm using translator
Robertmorgan12 chapter 1 . 7/24
How often will updates come usually I wouldn’t comment on stories but stories like these are unique and I doubt I will be able to find one like it again so I want to know whether or not you will be updating
NineTailsoftheSun279 chapter 4 . 7/18
Oooh, is there going to be a Killer Croc-ette in the future? Anyway this is a wonderful fic and I hope to see more from it. And on the note of possible transformations, as something for latter in the series, since Azmuth seems to get DNA from all kinds of sources, would a Marvel Celestial be a option? I mean No-where is something you could just drop in to any galaxy, and it's a perfect source of DNA just waiting to be obtained. Just a thought.
NaruLemon Stories chapter 4 . 6/28
Lemonnnnns
HalloweenJackal0w0 chapter 4 . 6/24
Aww you could've extend the whole thing between Mary and Killer Croc, which at the moment I'm going to assume is the Killer Croc from Arkham Knight
herob2301 chapter 4 . 6/20
Hey, I know Poke still has a long way to go to be a competent author, but me and some of us see a bit of potential in what he does so let's try to give more constructive criticism and less flame and try to give him patients, but if the author is young means that this fanfic and the others can continue to improve and evolve better

also if you do not like what you read and you will only insult, then do not read it and stop bothering
KingZeRoPL chapter 4 . 6/20
7000000 thousand fucking time skips/place skips and wroaaaah groaaaah roaaaaaah roaaaaaar zroaaaat wroaaaaar thats all i see in this story...
KingZeRoPL chapter 3 . 6/20
You should stop using these annoying fucking effets "Roaaah wroaaah boooom, pew paw and other shit its fucking annoying
KingZeRoPL chapter 1 . 6/20
Mc as a good brainless fucker God why i think i will read it only for incest
Fox Boss chapter 4 . 6/18
The way you describe Naruto's Tengu form sounds a lot like Pell's hybrid form from One Piece.
SPeCTeR-ll7 chapter 4 . 6/18
Will there be any dc heroes and villains in the harem?
WhateverPlus chapter 4 . 6/18
I like this chapter, continue please.
insanemaelstorm chapter 4 . 6/17
This was good. Like how huntress was shown. Like how Naruto dealt with killer croc. Looking forward to reading more
thunderofdeath97 chapter 4 . 6/17
im wondering how big is the harem, and whos all in it? just curious lol
SPark681 chapter 4 . 6/17
Hmm, someone, who actually did the deed with Killer Croc damn I hate to know the aftereffects of that anyways keep up the great work!
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