It’s really good thank you for this amazing story and I hope the chapter 2 is coming soon

OMGGGG! I LOVEDDDDD ITTTT!... pleaseeeeeee post chapter 2 soon!

I fucking love this one-shot or whatever the fuck you decide to make this into. All I wanna say is that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It gave me so many different emotions when reading. You got me HOWLING at the part where she stole the damn tampons! Shit had me crying! But seriously, Aria, this totally reminded me of our au with you and Eric! WALLY'S EGO MATCHES YOURS. YOU CANNOT CHANGE MY MIND! I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHHH! I SHIP IT SO MUCH TOO (thanks to you)
BLESS THEM ALLL! Continue being lovely, hoe!

Ugh, this was perfect. I wholeheartedly agree that we *deserve* more Flinx in this world, and this is a wonderful contribution! The ending was amusing, and I assume that Jinx discovers who Wally is during part two, so now I'm looking forward to that!

The only critique I have, is that a lot of your sentences don't end with punctuation. Just keep in mind that every sentence needs a period or a question mark or something of the sort :)

~ Katie

This was written so well and was so engaging! Can't wait for more

That was terrific. I liked both parts, the filling in of internal monologue from Lightspeed and your bridging the gap of how they get together after that.