Story is great and i'm still loving it, cant wait for next chapter, sorry for bland review, but its 2 in the morning for me and everything flowing like a wave

I need more

You really need to mark the changes in perspective. It could be as simple as a line, but as it is now it is confusing each time you change the perspective.

Aside of that, the story is interesting and I will follow it.

I really like this concept! Please keep up the awesome work!

well I for one am already enjoying this story and cant wait to see where it goes, hope to see a chapter 2 :)