Amazing story!

I love this story. Being a HUGE Jasper fan and all, how could I not? Good job!

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I found this story refreshing. i have never read another like it. you are a very good story teller. I continue to read your other stories.

this was an awesome ending thank you for sharing your story with us. See now they have people coming in and wanting to join, since Aro got killed by Marcus. Glad everything worked out for the best right.

another interesting chapter I thought. Wow Bela a leader awesome I think.

wow that has to be hard on anyone to see death each day. I wonder how Edward faired through the day lol. He can't use his gift like Aro and the other kings said this is good.

this was a good chapter I thought. I wonder if Edward would change his attitude or not. If not I wonder what would happen to him? I just hope things work out well for Bella and Jasper and the others that Bella really likes. Also I wonder if Bella will help Marcus out.

this was a good chapter I thought. Too bad Edward lost all the jewelry that he took from other people well vampires. I sure hope he gets punished right.

this was a good chapter, too bad Aro forced Bella to kill Stefan and his brother. I hope Bella is going to be alright.

this was a good chapter I sure hope no more comes to them that they can have a rest. I wonder if they will go after the two that made that army to attack Volturri.

this was a good chapter, glad that Bella's training is going good. I just hope that she and Jasper are going to be alright, and I hope that they would be able to leave.

This was an interesting chapter as well. Wow so Esme and Carlisle are gone now for showing the humans to them, not good, so now they paid for their crimes. That is very sad that Bella has to wait to go see her dad at the grave site.

this was a good chapter as well. Sorry for Bella's loss though. Yes I do hope that they catch Victoria and she is to be brought down. I sure hope that her mom is going to be alright though.

this was interesting. So Carlisle is telling people lies about them, and of Bella this isn't good at all. I hope that Aro listens to Thomas before they leave the throne room right. Yes what Bella said I do hope that Carlisle and Esme gets what is coming to them.