Great chapter

don't usually leave reviews but I'm so hyped for chapter 7

Not a bad story. Needs some work, editing/proof reading, it feels rushed, things need to be expanded upon.

Gah! It kills me that this is where it was left. Like, everything else, Catelyn being brought to justice is what I've waited for... and this last updated in November... 2019.

Even if you're blocked on everything else, please give us VENGEANCE!

This was fantastic. From the spitting because "Why not?" to the "dying is for other people", I LIKE this Jon Freeman.

This is the greatest version of Jon Snow ever

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

WHY?! WHY DOES IT END HERE?!

DDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMNNNNNNNNIIIIIITTTT!

THIS IS CHAOS. PURE UNADULTERATED CHAOS. I LOVE IT. WHAT DO YOU MEAN NO SLASH. YOU CAN DO AS MANY AS YOU CAN. SURROUNDED BY WOMEN WHO HATE YOU AND IN TURN PROTECTED BY MEN WHO ARE GRATEFUL . CANNOT SAY I HAVE EVER SEEN THIS DYNAMIC.

how do you plan to incorporate dragons here? It would be hilarious when Daenerys tries to burn Jon but the dragons (Vis and Rhae) move in for belly scratches (Drogon will be against as usual).

How will the war commence? Lannisters North vs renly ?

How do you plan to continue the character development of Jon? Murder-f**k everyone? Or simply move ahead while keeping the enemies closer? The way you have written multiple POVs thats how it is supposed to work. No worries in that part. Is english your second language?

... Hmm. The Seven strongly opposes slavery, so that means when Catelyn did what she did with Jon, she was breaking a core tenant of her faith, and SHE KNEW IT.

Am I right to assume that her self-denial over the years slowly chipped away at her sanity until... this? Kinda hard to say you're a good person if you knowingly went against a Very Important aspect of your own religion.

Also, Cat... NO. Westeros may be backwards, but even they know that when a person is killed, the first suspect tends to be that person's SPOUSE.

This is a great idea and decent execution; I really like we're this is headed, though it feels like you have an overabundance of Targareyans. Varys must not be that good at his job, if he lost track of THREE chesspieces.

I already want to know what Jon is going to do to Catelyn once he reaches Winterfell! and how is Ned going to react? Considering his hate for slavery, I guess it would not be pretty. Well, what matters now is that Jon is home and Winter is Comming for the Tully in Winterfell. When is the next chapter going to be posted?

Very nice work, a true AU work.

Great story

This is a terrible story.

Jon served with the Faceless Men, was a Water Dancer, is a "financial genius", etc. Really? It feels like you just threw every "cool" thing into a hat and picked a bunch out.

Besides that, Catelyn Stark sells Jon into slavery, despite it being HIGHLY illegal. Like, come on man.

Bruh he better keep daenerys as a bed warmer