Please update soon

While the story is interesting from what i understood from your A.N. does this means that there is not going to be no chapter beyond the first two from Hakuno pov and instead will be all from the servants ?

im pretty sure sessyoin servant's name was Andersen maybe I wrong but im don't think I am

this will so one-sided that its funny, Momonga in canon was ONE lv 100 to face these local "Elites"
now there are 3, even if they lack Bone Daddy's massive knowlegde of the game, they out-class the Sun scripture extremely.
then again, Players don't need to fear death, while the locals will die for good if they challenge something too strong for its EXP.

I'm a touch disappointed Lu Bu never showed, but I suppose he will have his time. I do agree about copying it word for word. Why was Charlemagne carrying the goblin horn? Why cast those spells? I could nitpick it further but it's pointless.

"The attacker was a man. a]A young man with black and white hair with blue Charlemagne first kills.

Okay, I like the story, but the fact that Charles (I don’t trust myself to spell that name right), used the exact same spells and even gave the same item to Enri as Momonga worries me. The spells I could sort of get, from their description they sound like effect spells for the situation, but the fact that he used the exact same item bothered me. Momonga apparently used the cash store a lot so he had a bunch of (what to him) were low value items. So two things, why would Charles have the horn, up until a couple hours ago, he was an NPC, why would he have access to the cash item shop, and there’s no reason for it to be given to him, if I understand it right that only people he would ever fight would be people who managed to get through literally ever other Defense and NPC SERAPH has, any one who managed to get through that won’t be slowed down by a couple low level goblins. I apologize if I come across as nitpicking, but the fact that what Charles did in that moment was almost word for word what Momonga worries me.

Otherwise, so far the story has been going pretty well, the little touches of character here and there really tie it all together, like Haku’s reaction to Nero dancing. Can’t wait to read more.

*GASP* Does this mean everyone's favorite Kouhai is here to torment/love her Senpai?! BB IS BACK!~

Kinda weird he gave her the same stuff Momonga did in Canon. I figured it'll be something like a platoon of Centurions or something.

Alright, I'm hooked. This is awesome.

Well.. at least its nice to see other servants perspectives, Robin Hood isn't seen a lot so nice to see him on the action.

Leave it to Charlie here to be all JUSTICE! Also, nice twist with the Robin Hood personality.

awesome

good chapter!

I mean, if you plan on side-story Momonga to be a major character you might as well read the translation out there. It’s not amazing but as fan translations go it’s decent, and definitely better than trying to write his character based on a wiki description.

Not much to say about this chapter, mostly just watching a bunch of soldiers get their asses kicked.