Domestic no Kanojo is a dumpster fire of a manga. Yet somehow I managed to read almost 200 chapters of it. Now, with this newest chapter eliciting the same vibe as said manga, I already feel myself involuntarily steeling for the upcoming escalation of the drama. Great work man.

I must say this story is oddly compelling and very well done, my eyes were glued to the screen as I read and couldn't look away. gonna be honest and say I was expecting it to be general Ironwood that she'd be dating ( with he having a broken marriage with glynda) but taiyang came as a surprise to me, which I should have considered but didn't somehow which was made it a pleasant surprise indeed. I'm looking forward to the the next chapter whenever you post it, keep up the good work!

Holy cow, now that is giving me flashbacks. The dumpster fire is being set ablaze, with the fuel being the frustrating feeling of WHYYYYYY.

Do wonder if you could manage the same amount of spiciness that the original series were capable of.

Domestic no kanojo, is not a masterpiece. Nonetheless an interesting take for it plot points. With the way you're localizing the plot to fit it with the RWBY characters, this may cause me to subconsciously feel frustrated to those characters now.

This may ruin it for me. Either way keep at it.

I'm not sure how Weiss figured Jaune out so quickly but I can't wait to see more!

Thank God, I thought it was Ironwood (he just doesn't seem the type). And while I don't see Tai as the cheating type either, I can see him move on from a bad, loveless relationship (and I do quite like this rare ship, even if it's more like an "obstacle" in this story).

This was a great chapter! I hope next chapter comes soon enough...

Really enjoying your take on the Domestic Girlfriend plot. The interactions between all of your characters (specifically Jaune/Weiss/Winter) have felt very natural to me. I’m really anxious to see Jaune and Winter’s first lengthy discussion post-ice cream incident. Also, was Jaune’s crush on Winter so obvious that Weiss did what she did at the end of the chapter as a result? Or is that just her lack of self-esteem showing?

Anyways, great writing! I’m looking forward to reading more.

Hmm I see. This is looking to be quite the mix between Domestic Girlfriend and Scum's Wish.

Tai was right. Nothing black and white or simple here. The adulterer who knows it is over with his wife. The hard as ice teacher who mellows in his company. The concerned sister. Teen with a crush using his flame's sister to heal some of the heartache. Who knows what Weiss desires as she made the offer? I can only imagine what chaos introducing Ruby and Yang down the road will bring.

I cannot recall a fanfiction with such a web of messy relationship dramas. Far more ambitious than the usual romance tale. About the only prediction I can make about where all this will end up is it will end in tears for someone. I don't know its possible every character is going to find their idealised happy ending.

Awesome

Keep it up im loving the story

Kind of figured something like that would happen, but not that way. Man, sounds like Weiss really has some issues to work through here. As for Taiyang... really curious how you will write him in this fic.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Really good chapter and the fact it was Tai not Qrow was a pretty good expectation subverted, can't wait for more. Now this is just me personally and I hope doesn't affect you in anyway but update more sooner if you can, this too good of a story to let it just lie around. One last thing, did you take inspiration from Domestic Girlfriend? If you did I hope you don't follow the complicated nature of the Manga.

i don't know if you've read it or not but your plot idea is quite similar to domestic girlfriend. I wouldn't be surprised if you haven't read it tbh since it is a bit cliche of a plot. however i like the angle ur taking. can't wait for future chaps

I usually don't review fanfics ,but because I really love this fanfics I'll type this and hope that keep this fic updated.

Ok, this is really nice keep up the good work.

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