Nagato like...NAGATO?

Okay, I officially think Suna has the strongest Kage right now. This universe is fascinating.

This was fabulous! Thank you! :D

Absolutely beautiful work,this fanfic is amazing and I cant wait for the sequel

Thank you for the very entertaining and original story.

I don't care how many characters you changed in order to avoid creating OCs. Rather than dealing Guren, you could have just created an OC younger sister or something.

Somebody has a crush~

I like this version of the council better than the Canon one. More realistic to the practicalities of the world.

Good to see a Sakura who is actually useful in battle

This was a good chapter. I like how they're building bonds slowly over blood and sweat.

Sorry if I seem super mean about your spelling but that really is the only thing that needs to be improved upon. Your plot is good. Your dialog is not at all cheesy, as fanfiction often gets. Your grammar is good. Really, you just need a spell check.

Your chapter title is misspelled. It's "thief" not theif. Also, you misspelled Naruto in one place.

you have a typo mistake in this chapter. "Fried" instead of "tried"

Good battle

Once again, a solid chapter

This chapter didn't have any of the errors that the previous one did. Your beta did a good job.

Its interesting to see a hardass Kakashi.