Reviews for One Call Changed Everything |
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Shadic Fusion chapter 7 . 2/12 Extremely cute and a funny chapter. Pls add more to it, it seemed like you left it as a cliffhanger here. |
luvnanofate chapter 7 . 10/28/2019 I'm a little late getting this review done, my apologies. I really liked it. Your use off Cotaro liking Maki is just awesome. And Nico 's mom talking to her and giving her approval was hilarious as was her comment to go to a hotel next time. Hahaha lmao Thanks again for the update. Jay |
Magiclapras chapter 6 . 6/26/2019 And now Nozomi has all the ammo she needs to tease them. |
luvnanofate chapter 6 . 6/18/2019 I'm not sure that Nokomis would normally tell everyone about Nicole and Maki or tell Maki of Nico's crush. Nokomis is the type to work more behind-the-scenes. It is a bit out-of-character of Nozomi, but at this point I don't think it hurts the stotyline. I'm enjoying your story a lot and eagerly await the next update. Hang in there! Jay |
Moonyro chapter 4 . 6/15/2019 I guess I'll leave my contribution regarding the tarot. For the "scared and angry" you could use "The moon," which has those qualities. For the "love" easy guess, "The lovers." You can search those two and maybe edit it. That's all I have to say. I'm enjoying the story so far. Keep it up. |
Dawn101seeker chapter 4 . 6/12/2019 please continue though i do have one minor criticism here. though the explaination may get long note i am not an expert in tarot reading i only knew some of the names of the cards. i learned some from finding a list of the names which happened to contain the meanings Tldr. Tarot cards names are rather vague and have multiple and different meanings and the meaning changes if the card is upright or reverse so it requires interpretation by the tarot reader they can't be read by just anyone like maki did in this chapter tarot cards don't have a cards like you described there aren't any cards named Scared, Angry, Fear or Love this leads me to the conclusion that you do not know much about how tarot cards work. now to be honest i don't know that much either but i do know that the cards require interpretation on the tarot readers part. if you just hold up a card or cards from a reading and just show them to a regular person all they will see is simply cards with rather vague names like: The World, The Sun, The Moon, Death, Judgement, The Fool, etc. they won't know the meaning of the cards shown by a glance like maki did. |
ShadowPena9 chapter 3 . 6/6/2019 awesome story. keep it up!.:) |
Dawn101seeker chapter 3 . 5/28/2019 good work keep it up |
Dawn101seeker chapter 2 . 5/25/2019 more please |
blinkkittylove chapter 1 . 5/19/2019 Cute and sweet with a bit of ominous. Maki interacting with Nico's family always has such fun possibilities so I'm looking forward to how this develops. |
ChiPee21 chapter 1 . 5/18/2019 This looks interesting author san, I hope Maki achieve her dreams and also more power to the NicoMaki duo |