Reviews for Seven Swords
Dragoncyber22 chapter 4 . 6/11
Man what a story you are writing and with a different pairing. This story continues, it's perfect.
SelenetheNerd chapter 4 . 3/28
This was fantastic and I can’t wait for the next chapter
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 4 . 2/5
Pls make more o this!
hinatanamikazesama chapter 4 . 1/13
UPDATE SOON MASTER SAMAA PLEASEEEE
ReaperDemonIceWolf chapter 1 . 11/27/2019
When I first started reading this story it had me hooked right from the get go. Between the long chapters and the plot I havent been able to stop and I really would like to see how you take this story further. Using the 7 deadly sins on there mask was pure mind blowing and it works. I am wondering when you plan on bringing sakura into the story for her to be with naruto though. Over all I love your story and I look forward to chapter 5.
TigrezzTail chapter 4 . 10/12/2019
Heh, the sins thing can be fun(I love both those shows!). The enemies especially might tie themselves in knots trying to figure out if they are significant and how to use it to their advantage. But it'll basically be as if it were a great prank and act as a distracting factor to their enemies.

I do worry about them facing Sasuke. It depends on whether Danzo has allowed Sasuke to progress in Genjutsu. After all, he won't want Sasuke trying to take the seat from him prematurely out of greed and arrogance.
Daniel chapter 4 . 9/10/2019
This has got to be one of the best stories I have read so far. Please keep up the excellent work! I would recommend this story to anyone else who likes Naruto au's. I don't have an account to follow you and favorite you but I have booked marked story and it's one of the best know around.
Wika0304 chapter 1 . 9/7/2019
I would be great with Naruto being Samehada's wielder he would gain shark-like look
thegrison chapter 4 . 9/3/2019
Good idea but so many errors, and wrong information. Changing the past events to just to help your story try to make sense. Well good luck in the future as I will not be reading this story unless you re write it. Oh correct your spelling.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/19/2019
Daimyos send their Samurais & Guardians at the Fire Daimyo. Naruto becomes the first Swordsman as a Daimyo.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 7/30/2019
Well done and I’m loving this! Bet he gets a world of shock when his expectations of Sakura being with anyone are shot to hell and back!
PraetorXyn chapter 4 . 7/21/2019
Decent start here. I'll keep reading this for now but these issues really stick out like a sore thumb and make it difficult to enjoy.

1. Naruto is weak. Early in the fic you brought up shadow clone training, and he's been training for probably 6-7 years. With the number of clones he can produce, say 1000, the amount of training he should have is immense, more than other ninja will have in a century, easily enough time to master each of the elements like Hiruzen, become a sage, become a master swordsman, become a fuuinjutsu master, taijutsu master, master kyubbi's chakra, etc. This Naruto honestly looks weaker than the one at the end of canon (minus the hax Rikudo power) despite being probably 2-4 years older. Hell, he's very close to Uzu right now, he could have gotten the fuuinjutsu scrolls from there and such to honor his heritage.

2. It's been so long the rebellion should have been over years ago. It just hurts the story that it isn't by this point, it breaks immersion and feels like we're bogged down in it.

3. None of the other great villages seem to have reacted in any way to Konoha aggressively expanding. Iwa in particular would probably consider war over it. Taki they might not have cared about but Suna is one of the big 5, as is Kiri if Danzo goes for that. The whole point of making Danzo Hokage is to demonstrate that he'd run it into the ground with his controllingwar hawk ways. To this point you don't seem to have made any consequences whatsoever for his actions and make him look like a competent ruler. After banishing Naruto, Konoha should have lost all the economic alliances he forged for them and been suffering from the get go.

4. Naruto's feelings for Sakura are even dumber here than they were in canon. In both cases she treated him like utter garbage for most of his life, and at this point he doesn't know she's changed her ways. He's been around people who respect and admire him for 6-7 years. He shouldn't even think of the pink banshee. It's worse here because he should know better in this story after the change of scenery and forming of new bonds.

5. It makes no sense for Haku to not be in the harem after the history they share together. I'd argue she makes the most sense to be with him out of anyone excepting perhaps Hinata. For that matter, it makes no sense that he's around 20 at this point and his romantic relationships don't seem to have progressed at all due to his again dumb infatuation with Sakura.
Nerdy Geekdom chapter 4 . 7/10/2019
Really great story thus far. I really hope that they start using their 'Sins' as their codenames. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens and how Naruto leads the Swordsmen and helps Kiri establish itself while trying to supplant Danzo. Really great story. Keep going.
Mr.LightYagami chapter 1 . 7/5/2019
Hey buddy can you replace fu with femhaku? Since they work together i just you could femhaku in naruto harem.
Timberwolfe chapter 4 . 6/29/2019
Hey, great story so far. I'm loving the long chapters and he pace of the story. The only fault I see is the romance and intimacy of the harem you've been asking upon in the AN notes. For one, if this is NaruSaku then Harem, I'd like to see a switch to Sakura's perspective on Konoha's side. Show her thinking of seeing Naruto in the crowd and accidental pullout of some look-alike. Have Ino be her friend and point out that Naruto is probably dead or something. Whatever the case, I hope Sakura is introduced soon, preferably in Suna, or helping Naruto rescue Jaraiya and Tsunade as a spy.
I'd like some sexual scenes with the other girls who are fine with the other girls. Hotaro has made friends with Karin I see, a little scene like that topic. Finally, Mei needs to move forward in the romance. She's in charge; have her be bossy, and Naruto the loyal soldier. He's been with Shion, so he should be malleable for the cause. So in final, more Sakura buildup. Thanks
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