Reviews for Book of Lemons, Part 1 |
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catspats31 chapter 2 . 11/16/2019 While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines: "Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference." Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as AdultFanfiction. |
StruggleSnuggle chapter 17 . 10/25/2019 For Bleach, have Matsumoto & Hitsugaya bang. |
Guest chapter 15 . 9/1/2019 I offer my condolences for your tragic loss. |
1995hzq chapter 15 . 9/1/2019 My condolences. Take time off. |
Naruhina 123 chapter 14 . 7/27/2019 Take care yourself first thr n do other stuff Ohh all the best for exam |
aishi chapter 12 . 7/1/2019 nice chapter, if you are up to it i would love to see one or some pairings from u i like from this list below naruto x kaguya naruto x yugao naruto x tayuya naruto x guren |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/1/2019 Fantastic chapter Other chapters I’d like to see Naruto with: Hinata and road to ninja Hinata Kushina and shadow clone Kushina sequel Kurenai and Mabui |
Naruhina 123 chapter 12 . 7/1/2019 Wow man it's a really good chapter It's good to see you back |
aishi chapter 10 . 6/14/2019 really nice chapter, if u feel like it pls write a naruto x yugao / konan/ kaguya pairing , whichever u like |
thor94 chapter 10 . 6/14/2019 really fun, i like when naruto is the submissive of the relationship. want to read more collared submissive naruto, especially ones involving bdsm |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/10/2019 Here's a request, after Naruto pulls a prank which accidently destroys Tsunade's desk, she's pissed off. As punishment, she calls Naruto to her office and one of her ANBU knocks him unconscious, when he wakes up he found himself tied to her chair with chakra sealing ropes. Tsunade rapes and rides him until she finishes her paperwork which is going to be an all nighter. |
The Supreme Kitsune Sage chapter 8 . 6/11/2019 Great chapter looking foward to the next one. Can you do a Naruto x Hanabi x Hinata or a Naruto x Karin x Kushina or Naruto x Naruko(twin not shadow clone) x Kushina or even Naruto x Mikoto x Kushina? |
edtru23 chapter 9 . 6/11/2019 Great work. Your fic Is fantastic i hope for More stories and i want a Lemon of these Threesomes: Naruto x Hinata x Hanabi Naruto x Sakura x Hinata Naruto x Sakura x Ino Sasuke x Sakura x Karin Naruto x Tsunade x Shizune Have a nice day |
thor94 chapter 5 . 6/11/2019 really hot chapter. Would like more lemons with naruto having his ass and other holes filled and fucked |
9119 chapter 7 . 6/6/2019 Naruto X Samui X Mabui Naruto and Hinata have a threesome with RTN Hinata Include anal play like finger in ass or ass licking |