Reviews for Heroes
InsaneMakaioshin chapter 26 . 7/19
1. Zald & Alfia could be level 7s after Achilles & they are simply dead & not counted
2. Could Albert & the Argonaut have been level 7s? It's been a few thousand years, most wouldn't remember if so! If they never entered the dungeon, 9 wouldn't be unreasonable, especially for the Argonaut!
3. Will Astraea appear in the story, either in flashback or hanging out with Zeus & Hera in the present?

4. Will Thor, Balder or Hercules appear? Hate the last 2 for imprisoning Loki's lover for the former & raping Amazons for the ladder & being arrogant pricks for both!
5. Aisha told Ryuu that she was one of the many members of the Hermes familia, not legally registered by the guild, so she was legally familialess! I think it was implied that Hermes's familia was 5 times larger than legally recorded! Aisha even said she could blackmail Hermes into letting her leave!

6. Will Lena, Samira & the other 3 Amazons that jumped Bell with Aisha & Lena join Hestia familia?

7. Are the 10 amazons, Dwarf Quintuplets, Mohawk human triplets & Buff catgirl that were waiting to join the hestia familia after the Apollo Wargame descendents of the Zeus/Hera familia? If so, could they join after hearing about Caesar?
8. How will you explain Enyo, without Dionysus?!
9. Will Noel appear?
10. Will Rakia & Telskyura appear? Welf's grandfather is implied to be seeking redemption with Welf & Argana is in love with Finn & Bache falling for Bell would be interesting!
11. I put forth the theory that Syr is both an orphaned raised by Freya after her home was destroyed & the new unofficial level 7. Either becoming 7 immediately before Bell came to Orario, or during the Xenos incident! Will you include this in your story?!
12. Will more characters in love with Bell, like Marie the mermaid Xenos, appear?!
13. I once put forth the theory that the reason the Light & Dark elf kings joined Freya is because they were at war & destroyed their own kingdoms with Freya recruiting the survivors into her familia! Will you include this in your story?!
14. I theorized that Anya was cursed by evilarius to never set foot on the Freya familia property again & that's why she & her brother are distant!
Brevity Chaos chapter 26 . 7/18
lol this reminds me just how much I hate self-insert fics. Clearly it is just pure utter shit.
mairsarmy321 chapter 26 . 7/18
Lol come on Ais, work up the courage and confess to Bell already.

OHhh nevermind, the tournament would actually be an amazing setting for them to confess to each other. Like they would compete against one another and then after an mazing fight, they finally work up the courage to confess to one another.

Or it would hilarious if by accident Ais confess she loves him in front of everyone and then she runs away just like bell usually does. That would be funny.

Anyways great chapter. can't wait for the next one
derethl2 chapter 26 . 7/18
To be honest, I think their reaction went a bit overboard. I mean, isn't Hestia like a million years old or something like that and she is aiming to get in Bell's pants? Friendly remainder that Bell is ~14 y/o too. How's that any better? All the gods and godesses and MUCH older than any other mortal, so if the problem is the age gap, shouldn't it apply to them too?
Jp3711nc1 chapter 26 . 7/18
dont know freya true intentions on having bell but this is one of them sye is very obsessed with him. I hope the books do take this route with ot and introduce a father figure for him. someone in the rules familiar does come in I wouldn't mind him being younger around 30s since elf's onlive a long time. unless humans have a longer life span then we do now and look young even being 50s.
afreask chapter 26 . 7/18
LMAO, wtf did I just read. That was quite visual. I won't be able to look at Haruhime without picturing that ever again. Still, it was a good chapter and very entertaining.
Guest chapter 26 . 7/17
Well that was an...interesting meeting. I'm glad Bell was able to be assertive in this towards Freya, and I honestly forsaw the Pleasure District being brought up in this. Lol. Glad Bell handled that one very well and the Achilles manned up to it. Though at the expense of being revealed that he still retaining his V-card, much to a certain Elf's pleasure. Not that it's a bad thing. That just means your doing things properly in terms of relationships. And Aiz, don't worry, Bell loves you already, you two just need to express it to one another. Though keep mind of the competition for him, though I'm still on board for the harem route. :3 I'm defimitely looking forward to it for sure with Aiz and Haru is the main two. ;) Happy to see Bell being accommodating towards the Freya Familia despite not liking him, which very much expresses Bell's personality. And dear kami, Freya's mind went beyond the gutter here. 0_0 I can't even imagine how many people got scared from that...Uh...Moving on. Evilus makes their move and it seems like Revis is being sent to infiltrate the Hestia Familia Manor, meaning...Bell and Revis will finally encounter. :3 I look forward to it. I know that Bell is now currently more than a match for her and the fight will be explosive. :3 Not gonna lie, I actually do want to see Revis taking an interest in Bell in more ways than one. :3 Plus Aiz's reaction would be priceless. That being said, I'm happy you updated and it was a very well-written chapter indeed. I definitely look forward to the next one. :) Keep up the great work and stay safe from the coronavirus. :)

Harem for Bell:

Aiz, Lefiya, Filvis, Syr, Ryuu, Eina, Lili, Hestia, Haruhime, Airmid, Wiene, Cassandra, Aisha, Arnya, Chloe, Lunoire, Revis, And Mikoto. (Freya if she TRULY changes.)
Lucius Walker chapter 26 . 7/17
Just absolutely loved the meeting we've all been waiting for. As expected, it got emotional, it got tense, and we learned much about our characters.

And damn, you made me forgot about the mysterious antagonists in the dungeon. I don't know what treasures they were referring to, but none of them can be good if they fell into the wrong hands.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter as always.
Omnistar chapter 26 . 7/17
Interesting as always! I was wondering when we would get back to the secrets of the Zeus Familia. Something that Hestia has some knowledge about as well, if I recall. And if I'm correct, the events of Sword Oratoria LN 12 have not happened yet, yes? That, or the events have and Ein has been busy making clones. In either case, the flow of the story was excellent and everything looked well constructed. I did think this chapter felt a little shorter than the others. In regards of Freya, well, she is a goddess of fertility, so her suggestion (and the response) was unsurprising, if surprisingly funny. I look forward to your next chapter!
Shin Hyo Joon chapter 26 . 7/17
This chapter was really good.
Bell was really grown so manly and cool yet still adobrable.
Also Riveria reaction was really best one when Achilles say he still a virgin.
Gosh i love this!
Rider126 chapter 26 . 7/17
Ok, Freya your mind has gone from dirty to straight up RAW SEWAGE!
King kong chapter 1 . 7/16
Your story was definitely enjoyable
And your way was the best way to discribe ais feelings
In most of fic I read the most writes forget ais personality and her air head personality but you didn't you put it together perfectly
And i saw in the review rabbit goot said u to writte a time Travel fanfic and i don't think it is a bad idea your time travel fanfiction would be good many of us in time travel communities would like to read it the story may clash with cannon but if you could pull this story you could do the time travel fanfiction waiting for you updation
Rabbit goot chapter 1 . 7/16
Your fic is good
You should write a time Travel fic of danmachi
CRimson king chapter 1 . 7/16
You story is good when i say good it is very good
The way you describe ais feelings is perfect for character air head as she is. not every story i have read of danmachi didn't had it your twists and turns are enjoyable soo keep the hard work i be cheering for you

On other note have ever thought about writing a time travel fanfiction of danmachi well you mentioned ais time traveled so what will happen an bell time travel back to his young body

Not the best topic but i think many of us in time travel community will love to read your fic about it soo please consider it and update soon
InsaneMakaioshin chapter 25 . 7/14
1. There are 2 more confirmed level 7s recently, Alfia, a member of the Hera familia, not the captain, & Zald, non-captain of Zeus familia. They probably weren't captains or vice captains, because when fighting Riveria & Gareth, neither refered to her as the captain of the Hera familia, even in thought. Ottar didn't refer to Zald as the captain either when fighting him. wiki/Alfia wiki/Zald Will they be worked into the story?

2. Could Albert & the Argonaut have been level 7s? It's been a few thousand years, most wouldn't remember if so!
3. Will Astraea appear in the story, either in flashback or hanging out with Zeus & Hera in the present?

4. Will Thor, Balder or Hercules appear? Hate the last 2 for imprisoning Loki's lover for the former & raping Amazons for the ladder & being arrogant pricks for both!

5. Will Achilles male lover Patroclus be mentioned in the story?
6. Will Artemis & the movie be mentioned in this story?
7. Will Artemis return as a love interest?
8. Will Aisha be joining the Hestia familia & the harem? I have a thing for amazons & Aisha in this story is tied with Artemis in the movie as Bell’s healthiest romantic relationship.
9. Will Lena, Samira & the other 3 Amazons that jumped Bell with Aisha & Lena join Hestia familia?
10. Will Hestia learn the truth of Bell’s training with Aisha?
11. Are the 10 amazons, Dwarf Quintuplets, Mohawk human triplets & Buff catgirl that were waiting to join the hestia familia after the Apollo Wargame descendents of the Zeus/Hera familia? If so, could they join after hearing about Caesar?

12. Will there be a lemon in this story?
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