So I guess Jaina Hudson' is your own original character? Anyways, this fanfic was somewhat decent. It made me realize how nice for it for Lucius to know Batman's secret identity Bruce and Jaina were so dorky at the charity party. I was just as surprised as Bruce and Lucius as Jaina was charmed by Bruce. I thought it was kind of predictive Jaina was gonna be the baddie in the end. But it's not really your fault, I have seen this trope so many times.