| Reviews for Journey through Universes: Of Metal and Bones |
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   D.N.guardian chapter 5 . 7/17 There was a bit of a glitch here, the glass from Stetmann's research log was not "mineral glass", it was "protoss glass" or rather "khaydarin glass" the type of glass they use both for their units and facilities and basically all of its technology. "Khaydarin crystals are monolithic psychic artifacts psi-active, left by the xel'naga on various worlds. They are largely organic blue stones, although they can vary in color from purple to green. Their name means" focuser of the heart "in the Khalani language. (taken from the wiki) I am also enjoying the story and I am looking forward to seeing Momonga's reaction when I see an army of spaceships in that medieval fantasy world, not to mention the motherships being basically the game's aerial monster that had to be limited to one per departure. |
| Dylan-A-Friend chapter 5 . 3/8 Nice! |
| look2019 chapter 5 . 1/25 Good Chapter! |
| Arachnodon chapter 5 . 1/26 Mate, you use "observer" and "probe" interchangably. It's confusing. Also, could you take apart some sentences? they're very long and complex, I need to read them several times to understand them. |
| UndeadLord22 chapter 5 . 1/25 Now im curious who will our MC Master Probe fight against. |
| Shamiko chapter 4 . 10/16/2019 Is this where the Overlord part comes into play? I’m excited! |
| wolpe chapter 4 . 8/24/2019 Thank you for the chapter :D |
| Reader25846 chapter 2 . 8/19/2019 Still waiting for the Overlord part of the story |
| Reader25846 chapter 1 . 8/19/2019 Can't he create new units by experimenting in his existing tech? |
| Ozzman84 chapter 4 . 8/9/2019 I can't Wait for Ainz to look out his window and see some Carriers and Shit his pants at the Prospect of an Alien Invasion |
| AmanoRyo chapter 4 . 8/9/2019 Please if you ever create a new unit, make their names sound protoss, like them church positions XD. Anyways i like how this story is going though the MC is a bit of a cusser and is prone to panic attacks... I can ignore that as long as it stays at an acceptable level, hopefully there wont be a female that would make MC go Gaga and follow the sex craze route |
| look2019 chapter 4 . 8/8/2019 I liked the chapter! |
| Sleepmat10 chapter 4 . 8/8/2019 So will this mc get stronger just from being here or something, also is it possible for him to ever get stronger to resist the purifier intrusion in the future, also I'm very interested how you will try to accommodate for how magic is and how it works. |
| Ayman El Kadouri chapter 4 . 8/8/2019 Oh yeah moving the story Thanks for the update |
| Esteban Chamy chapter 4 . 8/8/2019 Keep going, Overlord is here papa bones is coming, I expect great things of this fanfiction |
