Thank you for writing and for sharing!

This genuinely had me in tears before I was halfway through. Your writing is like Elizabeth’s storytelling and I was very invested. It also helped me to cope through some personal relationship struggles so I really thank God for using your story to help with my healing. You are a great writer and I would be eager to read more of your work! It’s funny I actually read the sequel before this one and all in one day! I loved them both dearly! I was very perturbed about Caroline and my only thoughts about improvement would be getting rid of her sooner haha! Thank you again for sharing your talent and creativity ️

I must confess, I loved every single chapter. The characters behaved accurately in my opinion and the story was overall very enjoyable. Although, towards the end, I feared it would just be one of those stories where "it was all a dream" and that you'd leave it there. If that would've happened I would've been very disappointed, however, the turn of events was very entertaining and I think it was a great idea. Since all the events of the book would've worked differently now that he knows about his affection towards her even before the courtship started.
In conclusion lol, you did a great job, I just wanted to let you know that. It has become one of my favorite stories! Thank you

Simply Brilliant, Intriguing & Fun!

Stevie

I liked this. great story.

Engaging story. Only thing "wrong" you do not start riding horses until that are at least three. At two years old they are usually gangly and have at lot of growing to to. Thourgbreed race horses are ridden earlier but not as riding horses.

what a lovely surprise twist end to a great story, thanks for sharing your talents

Like the memory premise, but iffy on his liking Caroline. I’ll give it a go. I just have so much less respect for him if he actually likes the horrid shrew.

Hi great story, ignore negativity as long as you are happy with what you write. Thanks and look forward to reading more from you. All the best, Janet xx

I loved this story and especially its ending:)

On boy! Here he goes again! Is there going to be a sequel?!

Such a fantastic story! I keep going back to it to read again!

Haha, I like that you declare the end and then add that twist. I choose to see it as an alternate reality. But fun. Good story. I hated Caroline, but what can you do? Lol.

Oh the tangles...

Ah, I've often imagined this exact scenario, and just what Darcy's reaction would be to finding her in his bedroom! Happy to find it all here written for me, and complete!