why would you rewrite the entire thing after 1 chapter? Why not just edit the only chapter you have especially when it's so small?

when will there be another chapter

This story is good, I hope it will be updated in the future.

Guau que gran historia

nice start of the story thx for writing it
will be interesting to see how strong you will make naruto from the start

Excellent chapter

Ravel?

Why the hell would Naruto agree to become a devil? If he hated being called a demon by the villagers, why would he become what they hated?

Thank you.
Please keep up the good work.

Uh, no.

Me gusta. Solid first chapter mate. Can't wait for an update.

well so much for this story it started good but you just had to go an kill it completely by making Naruto into a fucking Kyubi. So what if the humans of THAT world can't use chakra Naruto ISN'T from that world he's from his own fucking world so his body wouldn't need to change you're just like a lot of the other idiots trying to find a way to turn Naruto into something he fucking isn't just because he's got Kurama in him. So have fun hope this piece of garbage story actually turns out well for you if you actually continue it but I will not be reading it since it's pure bullshit garbage with you having turned Naruto into something he really fucking isn't

Good start, fairly original idea, great grammar

so far pretty interesting! will it be a harem or just Rias for Naruto?

that rook part was too much forced. well whatever...