Omg I wish there was more!

This is really cool! I look forward to more!

your writing is beautiful! and so much fun to read! I love powerful dark Jack and your interpretation of that is super interesting. the idea of him judging and executing but still having innocence is so perfectttt. thank you for posting I'm excited to read more

Omg I love this story! I would love it if u made more because this has the potential to be a MAJOR good story! Maybe the guardians can slowly realize the nature of their new member? It would be amazing to see that, especially with how well u write the characters. Anyway, great story and I hope to see more soon!

This fandom is alive as long as one fan still believes!

Can't wait for the me t chapter, because I oddly like this Judge!Jack

I love this!

This is certainly an interesting take you put on Jack.
You've really put emphasis on how innocent he was, but didn't truly understand the mortification of murder, with death as a companion, which is how Pitch met "Jockl Frosti" and takes it upon himself to provide him info and a potential ally/companion.

I like how you've written the interaction between Pitch and him. Having him as a sort of mentor a little during Jack's younger days, and then to have Jack to got to him at the ending of the chapter.

It's interesting to see that Pitch is quite fine with Jockl's execution, though that's probably due to him being quite closely related to fear and death.

Though, now that he Jack's claiming the Guardians as His, (Pitch being the 2nd, just after the children) I wonder how exactly Jack would've interacted with them. Would it have changed? Or would it have stayed the same? Does it stand by some of the movie's plot? Or does it derail, during the course of him and the Guardians tasked with taking down Pitch? How did Jack react with having to take down Pitch by the man in the moon?

These are a lot of questions, sorry about that, but I really do find it quite interesting your story, and how you've taken and shifted Jack's personality to fit more of the stuff of how the cold acts in real life, the good and the bad. A balance. It's also quite interesting to see how he goes about His.

Anyway! I'm going to stop here and just say the last few words. This was truly an intriguing and interesting take on this plot. It was amazing.

This was awesome!