I really like this chapter, please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

That was such a good idea with the names.

i loved the update especially the Dante and Zhalia's interaction, and of course of course Sophie and Lok have an idealistic view of the Casterwills that's getting shattered by every passing chapter. Honestly, my opinion of Sophie at the best of times is that Foucault has a point.

Great chapter! It will be interesting to see how the war against the blood spiral will turn out especially when Zhalia not infiltrating them. Hopefully Gemma succeeds.

Poor cathy. Not only has she been put into this world, her girlfriend is now going off to be a spy and she's worried now even more about things. Poor girl needs a hug.

They're so soft, so soft. 3

Great chapter, you captured both Zhalia and Dante perfectly. Can't wait to see what happens next. No doubt Dante will now want Zhalia off missions for a while, wonder how that will go down, knowing her, she may not be so delighted. Please update soon!

Yeah ummm Lok and Sophie don't take constructive criticism all that well from people they know well never mind a stranger.

I'm looking forward to seeing Nina interacting with casterwill Elders 3 She's a favourite.

Yes! Mention Lok's hypocriscy! poor Cathy! Eathan was her dad just as much as Lok, she DID have a right to know what happened to him.

By the end of this chapter I think Dante needs a wee nap lol.

Amazing as always! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I really enjoyed reading this chapter! Please update soon!

Looks like you made cathy a seeker will u not include den at all

i like the ending with Dante and Lucas and the slight hesitation Dante had about whether or not to fight Lucas until Sophie stepped in first and how his personal feelings might be sort of getting in the way of doing duty.

Cherit always missing the ghost of Lord Casterwill is like arghhh! cause he was so close to seeing him but didn't.

I feel you on the grammar thing (I have dyspraxia) and I think the soundtracks thing is awesome. Looking for to go on and seeing any new changes you might make.