I’ve only gotten to chapter 14 of this story so far but I’m so excited for more. Thank you for this!

As brilliant as ever! Loved the way you described the dethroning moment. Hope your writing is going well and please please please don't give up on this story. Best of luck!

Hey there! I'm the one from Discord. I'm eager to restart my reading on this :)

I'm really liking this story so far; you've done a great job of writing everyone in character and at the same time coming up with a suspenseful plot (I finished every chapter excited to see what would happen next; am still wondering what will happen with the plot to assassinate Arya). ExA's relationship was also well-fleshed out (it felt like a punch in the gut when she was forced to leave Mount Arngor after only one week).

With fanfiction, I've noticed that there is a tendency for authors to oversimplify book characters- to either glorify the ones they like or vilify the ones they don't like; but in this story the original main cast (and the added extras, Renir and Avelina) all come off as realistic and true to the source material. For example, I never really cared for book!Nasuada, and still don't really care for her here, but she has dimensions and the right amount of venom to her fangs, as you put it.

Overall, great job! I can't wait to see what happens next.

This is brilliant! I think the story is as close to wish fulfillment without being overtly character breaking to Paolini's work. I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter in the story. There are some grammar and word errors, however I'm willing to overlook them because of how good the story is.

Wow, was definitely not expecting that at all and it make me wonder who within the elves leadership made the move. I do wonder if you plan on Murtaugh or Arya using the word to prevent any of the elves or Surdans from using magic. I am happy how you found a way to bring Eragon and Arya closer together for a least chapter or two.

I just have to say you’re taking this story to a whole new level and are doing an awesome job. It’s hard to imagine the original direction you had in mind when you first started this story, but I’m glad you took your time and didn’t force an ending all those months ago. Thank you for adding a little bright spot in my day. Take as much time as you need to finish this story right. Until next time :)

Brilliant. Love the way you described the moment where Arya understands what happens, I really felt the shock for her. Wish you the best of luck for your writing - we will be impatiently waiting for those next chapters!

I really like this story so far and i‘d rather wait to read the rest of it than read some half assed ending. Thank you so much for writing so far.

I believe close to the beginning you meant “stopped the union between Lady Ismira and Lord Dain” you have Katrina instead of Ismira

The Riders are about be completely annihilated. Eragon is a weak, sniveling coward. Seems to me that Orrin is invincible.
Another story where the enemy force is overwhelming and all hope seems to be lost. Getting old and stale

Hopefully she took some eldunari with her

Hi! I have Just find your storie and I Just could nota stop reading It in the last 2 days. I must say this ia easily the best eragon FanFiction i've ever read.

Congrats for having taken the time to develop a real plot, especially in those last chapters, instead of rushing through the story as it would be tempting to do. Looking forward to seeing the story unfolding, the multiple pending questions receiving an answer and too long delayed reunions (missing ExA) taking place.

This is probably the best fanfic I’ve read so far, partially because of the content, and partially because it is set after FWW and holds a lot of realism. However, I just couldn’t resist voicing the few complaints I have. Sorry!

Why doesn’t Eragon tell Orin that Murtagh was a name slave and if the twins hadn’t captured him Hrothgar wouldn’t have been killed?

Also, only Eragon has the power of the Eldunari. If these magicians are stronger than Arya and Murtagh, he’ll be forced to fight.

Just came across this it's a great fanfiction mate. Love seeing the fandoms still active.