Reviews for The Boy Who Disappeared
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
Hogwarts School of Prayers and Miracles is a troll/crack fanfiction. This "Grace Ann" lady doesnt exist. She/he is just an internet troll. They are trolling wonderfully and have clearly succeeded in their job since a lot of people like you are apparently fooled.

It is just A TROLL FIC and it’s meant for the laughs. It’s meant to highlight the stupidity and cult mentality of some extreme people. No, it’s not mocking Christianity or feminism and no it’s not encouraging the stupid things said in this fic that are CLEARLY meant for the laughs. Tom Riddle’s perspective clearly displays it in the end.

Just read the last chapter again and pay attention to what "Voldemort" is actually saying. The author is using him as their Author Avatar.

I can see that you have written your own stories and you are quite successful writer on this site. But perhaps you should also learn how to read? And not get triggered over silly fanfiction? Tbh it just makes you look like a toddler throwing a tantrum. I guess you may be able to write really good stories but you still need help with your bad reading comprehension.

Or maybe its just so, so easy to feel morally superior in front of a silly troll fic

Either way, the fact that you didn't know that you were just feeding an internet troll, is just pathetic.
Kwng chapter 1 . 8/17/2019
Tbh it would be funny if it was just like the time dumbledore visited tom r jr where tom mentions that he can speak to snakes
crusader2113 chapter 2 . 8/13/2019
Fantastic story, but just one question, how would Harry show up on the Marauder's Map?
Kyred chapter 2 . 8/3/2019
Can’t wait for fallout.
starlite22 chapter 2 . 8/2/2019
Orphanages have been around for a long at least the 70’s if not before, they may have have slightly different names at least as far back as the 1900’s. They are still around now, just with a different name.
I find it hard to believe that the goblins of house elves wouldn’t of know Harry was still alive. And what about the black tapestry, Harry is a distant relation through his father’s mother? Talking of the Blacks, will Sirius be in this story?
I can’t stand Ron normally but he particularly horrible in this story, I hope he’s shown up for the horrible person he is.
I want to read more, but I hope you don’t keep us waiting till year seven for the be reveal.
starlite22 chapter 1 . 8/2/2019
Wow Albus has really done it this time. I love Albus and Weasley bashing stories I don’t like Ron, molly or Ginny.
I hope Albus gets what’s coming to him, when lily and hames fund out.
Also did lily and James not have more kids?
Hope Hermione plays a role in this.
BeeeTeee chapter 2 . 7/5/2019
I like this take on the WBWL storyline, it’s a flesh look on a trope that I usually enjoy. As for smut on this site, I can only answer based on my personal experience. I’ve written two novel length stories in different fandoms, one which has several graphic lemons and another that’s a bit more soft core. Neither have been taken down, so as long as you include a warning as a courtesy to readers who aren’t into that sort of thing I don’t see the issue. To be honest, if you take the time to switch the filter to ‘m’ it’s a bit unreasonable to be upset by smut.

Looking forward to future chapters.
thomaspheasant chapter 2 . 6/28/2019
please update immediately
JohnyXD chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
He dissuaded his wife from some form of closure? I mean, if he was at the platform, he would be reunited with his family. If not, they would at least know he's not at Hogwarts. They are still looking for him. No true parent with actual proof their missing child is alive would stop searching.
KayleASS chapter 2 . 6/15/2019
I'm really liking this way the story is going... excited for more!
Antisado chapter 2 . 6/14/2019
Ron apparently seems a bit mature for his age as i had imagined that someone like him would start hurling his wand everywhere the instant he was slapped
Truthandreality23 chapter 2 . 6/13/2019
Well, this is a refreshingly original piece. So Harry's romantic interest in this is Fleur? Will they meet at the same time in cannon or earlier?
Guest chapter 2 . 6/12/2019
Umm how can they not find Harry? They can use their blood since James is from an ancient and noble house. Oh and Harry looks like James right? The kids or long bottom should have recognized him. And the spell of dumbledore is 11 yrs old it should have fade away.

Poor potters I was hoping they'll have another child.
Seros109 chapter 2 . 6/11/2019
Die Szene im Zug war perfekt. Da zeigte sich wieder einmal Hermiones Temperament. Aus Ron hast du einen Draco gemacht. Für die Story finde ich es perfekt. Hier zeigt sich warum es von Dumbeldore eine gute Entscheidung war, Harry in der Muggelwelt aufwachsen zu lassen.

Das mit dem Waisenhaus ist, aus meiner Sicht, eine tickende Zeitbombe! Dumbeldore müsste wissen das er damit einen möglichen zweiten Riddle erschafft! Aber mit Hermione an Harrys Seite, da kann nichts so katastrophal schief gehen!

Wird es später eine Romanze zwischen Harry und Hermione geben? Hoffentlich nicht Neville. Ich finde das einzige Mädchen das zu Neville passt, ist Luna!

Wofür hast du Fleur vorgesehen?

Hat Harry nun denn Horcrux oder Ron? So wie du es geschrieben hast, denke ich das Ron es nun ist. Die Zeit, wirkt auf mich, als wäre Tom zu schnell abgehauen bevor ein Stück seiner Seele sich an Harry haften konnte.

Ich kann mir vorstellen das Harrys Eltern Ihn erst beim Feuerkelch wieder sehen werden. Photo in der Zeitung. Wenn Lily Harry Photo sehen würde. Würde doch sofort sich das Amulett mit Harrys Bild darauf sich aktualisieren. Oder irre ich mich, so funktioniert doch der Zauber?!

Was ist aus Amelia Bones geworden?

Wie hast du vor Sirius einzubauen?

Tolle Kapitel bisher, mach weiter so und schöne Grüße aus Deutschland

Google translation

The scene on the train was perfect. Once again Hermione's temperament showed. You made a Draco out of Ron. For the story, I think it's perfect. Here's why it was a good decision from Dumbledore to let Harry grow up in the Muggle world.

This with the orphanage is, in my view, a ticking time bomb! Dumbledore needs to know that he is creating a second Riddle! But with Hermione on Harry's side, nothing can go so catastrophically wrong!

Will there be a romance between Harry and Hermione later? Hopefully not Neville. I think the only girl that fits Neville is Luna!

What did you plan Fleur for?

Does Harry have Horcrux or Ron? The way you wrote it, I think Ron is. The time acts on me as if Tom had run away too fast before a piece of his soul could cling to Harry.

I can imagine that Harry's parents will see him again at the Goblet of Fire. Photo in the newspaper. If Lily would see Harry Photo. Would the amulet with Harry's picture update itself immediately? Or am I mistaken, so does the magic work ?!

What happened to Amelia Bones?

How do you plan to build in front of Sirius?

Great chapters so far, keep up the good work and best regards from Germany
Garnetio Solozari chapter 2 . 6/10/2019
Threatening a poor Nega-Santa like myself with spleen bashing is both wrong, and just plain redundant for me. Rowling once delivered several kidney punches on me, all of which completely unwarranted... alright so perhaps they were retaliatory. Still! I had to put that coal somewhere... oh you, get that mind out of whatever you children down south call gutters, honestly.

(Suddenly there was a jumble of sounds, a cacophony of muffled banging and unmistakable. strangling gurgles.)

Ahem, sorry about that...idiot... he can be quite troublesome. On to sunnier pastures, well done! I am most assuredly looking forward to examining deeper into how life in that miserable hole will influence how ickle-Harrikins handles the obstacles he’ll be facing, besides ginger and blonde Sour Patch Kids of course. Now, I imagine by now you’re well and over reading this abysmally long review, but if you took that red pill and haven’t stopped falling through the rabbit hole yet, I’ll take it just a smidgen further with a question.

Could you explain your reasoning why Harry was able to fit with all of the houses? I can see the lions, snakes and even possibly the eagles, but growing up around all those kids in a dog-eat-dog environment, along with adults who were clearly negligent, I can imagine nurturing a healthy sense of loyalty would be preposterous.
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