Damn. I don't know if I like Midoriya's character or not. His kindness is the main thing that makes him cool. He's a cinnamon roll. And his relationship with Toga isn't logical. He said he was going to help her and then he suddenly just gave up on her, right after she did something to actually make her worthwhile. There are so many good things too, though. While I don't know if I like Midoriya's personality anymore, I really like his character. Overall good shit, homie.

estoy de acuerdo con muchos otros esta historia perdió el rumbo izuku es bueno en una escena y a la otra e vuelve malo en otra sin razón aparente.

perdona a bakugo a pesar de que digo que lo odia.

los héroes lo golpean en una pulpa y los perdona sin mas y le cuenta todos sus secretos asi como asi

esto ya es ridículo
esta historia parecía seria al principio ahora parece que no trama tiene ahora, parece un montón de párrafos desordenados.

Fuck. I want him to be with Toga's crazy ass, but it doesn't look like that's happening. And he lost his eyes. The sharingan's too fucking cool, he can't just lose that shit. Let give him his eyes back and make it another OP Midoriya fic. This is some quality fan fiction. You don't see a lot of that. This story has done a lot to me. It has made me, anxious, sad, happy, angry, erect. So many different things done right.

What is this "shounen" garbage ? Why dont you write "Oru Maito" as well ? You know what - just write the entire thing in Japanese and post it on Japanese fanfic site, idiot.

ive never actually hated momo x izuku this much, but after her betrayal and basically ruining everything since then, i cant like her at all anymore, and the thought of them having any kind of positive relationship in this story just irritates me.

this story's plot is admittedly hard to follow for me because i dont know basically anything about naruto or any of the other major details of izuku's powers here, but i do quite enjoy it, i just really hate momo and cath now :V

great chapter for the most part, cant wait for the next :)))

How far are you on chapter 22

This is so cool

F-

G.

yea idk why I did dis lol

Ya me tiene hasta losla cojones el puto Izuku , el capitulo 20 fue lo mejor y lo peor esperaba una explosión y me dieron un maldito globo eso fue decepcionante , Yaoyorozu se volvió demasiado irritante para mi , me hiciste odiar a un personaje que amaba..

I-i-i-i-i...
I want to vomit.
That was... I don't want to say good. The writing was good. The chapter... was... realistic. Kudos on a well written piece of reality.

~Then from on high
Somewhere in the distance
There's a voice that calls
Remember who you are
If you lose yourself
Your courage soon will follow
So be strong tonight
Remember who you are
Yeah
You're a soldier now
Fighting in a battle
To be free once more
Yeah, that's worth fighting for~~

Guuuuuuuuurl! You confusing the heck out of me! I was doing it fine by myself, but, why did Izuku 'watch' the screen the first time, but not when the third round matches were being announced? I mean, I figured out that he could send the electronic waves from the screen straight to his brain, and all.
Also! DON'T CHANG A WORD OF THIS CHAPTER! I have been dying of laughter for the past half hour, because Midoriya keeps taking a sit! It is f¿ killing me! (Still dying of laughter)

i still really dont like momo anymore in this fic and now i dont like cath because she literally stole his memories and basically lied to the government. the lying part isnt the part im most upset about, it seems all of izuku's friends BESIDES katsuki, who canonically bullied him for his entire childhood, are betraying him or his trust.

YAH YAH YAH

this slaps

Quarantine has taken a lot of my ability to communicate, so it's hard to say just how hard this slaps

But this slaps HARD

Momo what the hell! I mean, sure, you have all the reasons to suspect Midoriya, but to try to end his life like that?
Who helped your parents? Who Turned blind to save your sorry ass? And who pratically gave you OFA? You sure knows how to betray people...

Also, hi. Very nice chapter author-kun. I look forward to the next one. See ya.