Hi, Lamia,

Thanks for submitting to the MOC. Sorry RL got in the way and caused me to delay completing this short review.

I loved how you used the prompt in a somewhat negative context with Spider-Man preferring to avoid the wormhole but unable to do so.

There was some good dialogue as this even more awkward Peter talks to that world’s version of Dr. O and ends up essentially being forced into assisting her to get the missing components to allow him to get home. The implication that this may be in a less than legal way shows a possibly worldly webslinger or maybe someone just desperate to get home. That was a nice way to end the story, leaving an opening for a continuation if desired.

Very nice work.

hahaha liv is crazy, but the fact that she doesnt care about the spiders is pretty funny here.

That’s funny.

omg i love the dialogue. peter b seems so awkwardly in character, yet the dialogue flows really naturally.

I actually loVE Liv in Into The Spider Verse so this is perfect! Peter is so awkward xD

Huh, interesting.