Very nice way of building the timeline and story.

Please update

Can you please explain the hermione taboo a little more please I’m still confused

Hermione Claws Out! I love it. I can’t wait to read the next chapters!

Good chapter. Looking forward to reading the next one. Thanks for writing.

Nifty

Glad you updated! I really liked your development of Hermione and Tom. It’s great seeing her standing up to Tom and not backing out.

Oh damn, the drama, the intrigue, the angst, the romance. I am dying for more! Awesome work.

I strongly recommend re-reading and doing a final edit, there were a few spelling errors and mixed up words. But all in all pretty awesome structure you have.

Can't forget another mystery!

How was Hermione born? The circumstances around her birth were hinted at, but what was the exact situation?

I'm really looking forward to this. Maybe it's connected to her limp? Maybe to the protection she left after her death? There are so many elements in the story that are only hinted at, but not even half-formed yet.

I'm honestly so excited for the story to unfold!

To nudge another update...this is the only fanfic I review, but here we go again.

Besides the multiple points of view that I commented about last chapter, I also appreciate the mystery element. The categories used are Romance/Angst, but I also think the story makes us want more because of the little things we don't have answers to.

1. Why does Hermione have a limp?
2. Why/how did Hermione die (ofc)? What role does Dumbledore play in that death?
3. How did Harry survive until now without "his" Hermione?
4. What is Voldemort's plan in getting Hermione back?

These are the most glaring questions I have as of now, and I'm really looking forward to seeing how you tackle these.

Also, I'm rather interested in Harry's interest in Hermione, as she's described as "the girl OF his dreams" rather than "the girl IN his dreams." "OF" implies an ideal, rather than simply being a recurring figure in his dreams, so although he's not exactly in love with her, it seems that he sees the dreams through Tom's eyes, making her something "more."

I'm looking forward to seeing more depth in Hermione's character (if this is going to happen). As of now, we mostly see her through everybody else's eyes and she seems rather flawless, if a bit stubborn. I'm not sure if it's intentionally going to stay that way, as we don't have a neutral narrator, but rather biased and unreliable POVs. Maybe she's intentionally a bit one-dimensional because the POVs are sugarcoated by the power of hindsight and tragic death/tragic aftermath. I think it'd be fine either way, because the main characters actually seem to be Harry, Dumbledore and Tom as of this point in the story. I AM really looking forward to seeing more of the older Slytherins' pasts (Malfoy, Rosier, Nott) with Hermione though, if that's going to happen.

I also appreciate the small details: that Hermione died (1941) before the Chamber of Secrets was opened (1942-1943 in canon)and that Tom has a reason for hating the Potters because of Fleamont (I'm guessing that's why he decided to go after them instead of the Longbottoms).

These are my thoughts so far. Hope you continue with it soon, and impatiently as ever, I'll be waiting for another update!

Interesting

oooo the plot thickens!

Thank you so much for the update! That's an exciting revelation. Can't wait for more.

wow this is getting exciting

I love it !