Reviews for Dying Light
Guest chapter 55 . 5h
A new gimmick per chapter doesn't make a plot. Just this chapter had waste 80% of worthless drivel and then just a small paragraph of a potential plot.

WTF?
Pavel.Fr chapter 54 . 8/3
Thank you so much for writing!
SentinalSlice chapter 32 . 7/31
Response to chapter 32. Since when did Luna watch Monty Python?
attacktitan100 chapter 17 . 7/28
i would suggest to you that dont make everyone to produce mithril. i'm hardly a econ student but think what happes when anyone can make gold or money papers it collapes economy. one harry is ok but a school full of them no no
Guest chapter 53 . 7/18
Take as long as you need. This is an amazing work that doesn't need to be rushed.
Pavel.Fr chapter 53 . 7/18
Thank you so much for updating! I loved the chapter!
Zooming Avid Reader chapter 34 . 7/11
"Soon you will call me master and you will serve me faithfully, you were always going to… it was your destiny"
Is this foreshadowimg the Elder Wand ending up with Harry
Zooming Avid Reader chapter 29 . 7/11
I just love the many layers you added to Dumbledore's character.
Zooming Avid Reader chapter 8 . 7/11
Feeling really sad about Harry. Great ending to the chapter. You made my emotions swell up.
Zooming Avid Reader chapter 4 . 7/11
Why didn't Harry buy some books about himself? He just heard Hermione say that there were books about himself and he loves to read.
Pavel.Fr chapter 52 . 7/10
I’m so excited every time you update! Thank you so much for writing and I can’t wait to see Harry develop his magic and friendship with Luna further!
Pavel.Fr chapter 51 . 7/5
Thank you so much for the update! I can’t wait to read the next chapter!
Fritter chapter 51 . 7/4
Could you please try to remember in your story that be Voldemort that escaped from the chamber was a 16-year-old kid? he is evil to be sure but it's like a child being told about what their future self did and then trying to duplicate it. I really think it could be an amazing part of the storyline.
Abby678 chapter 13 . 7/4
Don't you find it nerve-racking that Harry was sorted to ravenclaw but doesn't have a single friends in 1st year ravenclaw while he's friends with griffendor. What was point of sorting Harry to ravenclaw.
Nova Cryptid chapter 51 . 7/4
Wonderful chapter again! I like how Ron and Harry interact. Usually when they stop being friends Ron gets really clingy or rude or whatever and just stays that way. I like how they aren’t friends, but they aren’t mean to each other.
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