Wonderful story! I followed up on your others on Ao3 and enjoyed them too, then found you on Deviantart. Sent you a further note there. You have my watch!

I think your story is cute, it should have way more reviews.

This is a surprisingly good concept, I can't wait to the direction this story goes.

IMO, Cell has grown too soft too fast. Although it’s 11 chapters, each one is about 2k words, so there’s not a lot of development. Cell was literally a soulless killing machine, so the transition from that to caring family man is way too fast. You should’ve slowed it down a notch, gradually changing his behavior through key events.