| Reviews for Coming of the second Avatar |
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   AlphaKenny1 chapter 4 . 9/2 The story is good,BUT you change from rough grammar to horrible bad grammar out of nowhere, Try to use programs like grammarly to check it. |
| AlphaKenny1 chapter 2 . 9/2 You should really work on your grammar, use grammarly or something like that. |
| Guest2 chapter 1 . 8/28 When you update or rewrite your story |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/11 Hey not to be rude but you might want to fix some grammar issues other than that it’s a good read so far |
| The Midnight Huntress chapter 20 . 6/15 I love this story please update soon |
| Yuki Riki chapter 21 . 5/8 Any news? I mean like this story of yours, I just really want to read more of it.. |
| Guest2 chapter 21 . 4/20 Please please please please please update new chapter |
| Guest2 chapter 21 . 3/29 Please please don't stop want know happened next |
| Arthur chapter 21 . 3/10 Next please |
| Arkham Knight22 chapter 1 . 2/12 i love this story! |
| Guest chapter 21 . 12/18/2019 Naruto better be with korra and asami |
| Ace chapter 21 . 12/3/2019 Sorry to hear about the end of this story, but who knows maybe you'll decide to continue it someday. I hope you leave this story posted because I do like to go back and reread stories even if they are incomplete. I look forward to reading the rewrite. Good luck. |
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/1/2019 Please continue this story. |
| pitbull4567 chapter 20 . 9/1/2019 What a chapter look forward to more |
| Beastyd22 chapter 20 . 8/31/2019 Awesome chapter man but what is happening with naruto? Also please keep up the awesome work and keep updating thanks . |
