the best lineabout jealousy on the train! whole scene was shattered me. you re definitely a talented writer!

Amazing job!

god, another amazing Story!
I just love about anything you dish out, and this fluff right here? I think I got a sugar shock lmao

god These two are so adorable

Creepy stalking or not, this chapter was hilarious and I started laughing out loud at work!

hey Floraone 1st question are you German? I am a German fanfic writer on fanfiktion. de (BunnyXMamoru) I love your fics but if your native language is German so please write your fics in German too and upload them on fanfiktion. de
I live in UK and my English is okay but of course it's always better to read in the native language. Hope to read more stuff yay.

Omgggg I just caught that when he mentioned the "perks of being a superhero" he meant that he could spend time with Usa! Ahhhhh I love you I will forever reread your stories.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS. Everything was perfect, from Usagi’s “tests” to the reveal and the aftermath. I honestly wouldn’t mind a sequel, either, less along the fluffy lines and more along the lines of what happens/how the Crystal is finally revealed, does Beryl still manage to kidnap him, etc.

Girl, even your “fluff” has me on the edge of my seat! I’m in love with what you chose as his “fall” moment. I love how he so vividly remembered her fall moment, because, of course, he was smitten first. The reveal was adorable! It’s not often that we get to see a scenario where Usagi finds out first. That was refreshing! And then the cake was taken when she offered him a “place,” a “Senshi family,” at the end, because of course she would. This was too cute!

How do your stories always make me cry? What Magic is this? I mean, shocking talent of course but still. This was so lovely. Thank you. The sheer romance of it nearly killed me but the realistic sweetness was just breathtaking. You write dialogue so effortlessly that it’s like new canon. Wonderful.

“Sexy scientist. Shy-looking scientist. Any scientist.” made me laugh so hard it was embarrassing. Really enjoying this.

Awwwe fuck. That is so damn fluffy, it’s making my heart do this weird I-Can’t-even-handle thing?! What anpwrfectly perfect ending to the best, love square, fluff fest, reveal fic EVER? You wrote this in a week!? I’m so glad that I have more to read right now, cause o would be so sad otherwise. This was perfect, Flora, and I wish I’d been here while you posted ( though also super happy that I got to binge it?!)

Omg, that was perfection!? I mean. I feel like I’m totally repeating myself, but, it truly, really was! Leggin-clad Usagi and mamo in her room?! The dialogue is so good in this, Flora. Truly. Your Mamoru breaks my heart and makes me squeal happily with excitement in equal parts. I love the way you write him! And then the description of that kiss?! I was disappointed right along with her that her family was home and the walls were thin too because I would have liked to see that coming together of gd perfection! HANDS DOWN! Still, the whole Senshi family ending with my poor vulnerable really-just-wants-to-be-loved mamo-chan made up for the fact that we didn’t see her rip his clothes off and take him on the bed. (Which, I realize the rating wouldn’t support anyway haha but a girl can dream!)
I don’t want to read the last chapter. Because then this will be over ?! Thank god you still have so much more for me to read!

YYYYEEEEEEEEESSSS! Perfect reveal! PERFECT! I love that you write how Usagi loves mamoru, not tuxedo mask. I also forgot to mention that I love Usagi’s inner dialogue in regards to her physical attraction to Mamoru. Like super quirky, cute and totally Usagi-Like! The. The kiss, perfect, and his exasperation when she writes with pen on his hand! ( I feel this would drive Mamoru insane!) and of course that perfect gd reveal! (Also the shout out to the painting episode, and googled the bohème cafe ! ) so good! And awesome as flipping usual. Thank you.

I can’t even with how much I love this. So first, I googled all the trains and stuff because it was soooo cool that they are all real and I wanted to picture it?! That detail was awesome! I loved Mamoru’s reaction to everything on the train. It was so in character for him and the description of Usagi watching him in the glass as the train moved was super vivid and created amazing imagery for me? Like, if I had a modicum of art talent I would fan art that part of the scene, man. That kiss was perfect. From the glare, to Usagi telling him what she’s going to do and then his challenge. Super awesome parallel to the way that they tease each other, and it fit so perfectly! Then you ended it with that line. And omg. This is just so good! SO GOOD!

... wow. I just. That was so GOOD. I can’t say this enough! First of all, supermarkets are my jam lol and I love to see Usagi in them. But, then god. The ducking dialogue in this ?! It’s amazing! It’s so good! “... are you falling for me, Odango Atama?” Like YES SHE IS MAMORU! because. That was so good! The whole revealing but subtle parallel universe lines? And then Mamoru’s confession? How did you come up
With that?! That was brilliant! The in true Mamoru-like fashion he just leaves! LoL so good, I like that all the balls are in Usagi’s court right now. What are you going to do girl? WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO?! XDXD