Great chapter

Great chapter

Wow...I’m hooked!

Hello. This is Renchan7 from Reddit. I was the one that offered to leave reviews for anyone that left a link.

I'm not familiar with this fandom, nor is this fandom blind-friendly, but I did enjoy reading this first chapter. I can't even imagine finding out a close friend died of mysterious causes. The scissors are neat because who knows what will be the consequences (if any). Thanks for offering this fic

Great cahpter

Oh! It's been a while since the last update for this one, huh? And I admit, that might have played a little with the memories I had of previous chapters, for forgive me if I make a mistake while commenting on the details here and there.

In any case, this was another pretty good piece of writing, another example where you dive into the possibilities and 'powers' that are available to the characters featured in this story, the 'God' ones that is. I feel like that in this fic, compared to the Mewni-corps story, there is more focus on the significance of the actions on the long term, a collection of prophecies, legends and future visions that converge into the actual decisions taken by the God characters. If the Stars of the corps try to wriggle their way out of impossible situations with equally unconventional solutions, here we see the Gods themselves at work on said unfathomable happenings and still their targets may not be fully clear. I had to skim over a few of the previous chapter to remind me of part of what Evil and Science here were talking about, and yet the whole situation with the beast-men was still something completely new. I do have a question: this version of prehistory that Janna/Science has visited, is this the past of the world from which the original (and not divine) forms of the current Gods originated (so, Janna/Science's timeline)? Or is it something else and I'm missing something?

Man, you really went all out with this story and your imagination, right? I had vibes from a similar series of stories from another author, where there was another, huge structure built over the relatively speaking simpler canon universe, incredibly complex and where details were shared to us readers little bit by little bit, and your story does seem similar to me. It is something I can appreciate, because in my opinion connecting the dots and putting the puzzle together while trying to understand what in the name of Mewni is going on is a fun aspect of these maxi-AUs. My only observation here though is that sometimes there are jumps in points of views in the plot that make it unclear who we're dealing with in each part. I'll mention an example and ask a question at the same time: this is true in my opinion for the Star gaining entry to New Mewni and interrogating the Cloudy AI and the Star discussing with Dream in this chapter, are they Canon/PrimeUniverse Star from the first chapter and Republic from New Mewni respectively?

In any case, I'm still interested in seeing where you're getting at with this one. Keep up

Esto no ha parado de ponerse mas y mas extraño cada vez aun asi no pude parar de leer en fin quisiera saber como termina todo esto :)

Awsome chapter